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Clokworx 1 16.67%
Lay Fear 5 83.33%
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Old 04-27-07, 11:56 PM   #16
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Voted For: Lay Fear

Ah my cousin took this one by far. No offense clock but you came played and some of your shit was not even punches. Lay came with better punches and jus a better verse..good nameplay..lolz

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Old 04-28-07, 11:51 AM   #17
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Voted For: Lay Fear

Blah...

Clockworx bar breakdown:


I'm the Lion of this jungle, so prepare to get murked...
If I 'Layed-Fear' you'd be the product of my work...
ahhh...subpar breakdown, i understood what u were tryna say but i guess it dont look as good on paper.. 3/10
So stop rappin', sit down, and take off your blouse...
Cause i'm always down, like the switch in a blind mans house...
That was str8 but u shouldve been more complex with it by connecting both lines better, nd rewording wouldve helped to...5/10
This verse will protect me, If i'm wrong then correct me...
Wear the vest, so that the lead won't infect me...
That was jus str9 up wack...2/10
Take your verse in the paper bag so that you look broke...
Calling you garbage is an understatement like a footnote...
I liked this one a lil better...but the first line made the bar weaker..6/10
So after this battle, sit back and prepare to pray to the lord...
Cause i'll have you seeing colors, like you was in a Guitar Hero chord
Nah...2/10

FINAL SCORE- 18/50


Lay Fear bar breakdown:

Don't talk about your job C, or even think to attempt a hot verse..
Take u 'Outback' n stab ya wit a 'stake, hows' that to test if 'clok worx'
Nice opener, wasnt really feelin to much how it flowed tho, but it was good wordplay...7/10
I'll drop first to eliminate ur insecurity then I'll proceed to demolish it
I'm the first to throw out 'clock'..like im modelin what the ommish did
lol.. ite ite...7/10
Ya godless bitch I'll murder you, its a joke to think u'd be a rizing seed
Cuz clock beatin lay is about as much chance as U.S legalizing weed.
Thats really played and i didnt even like it anyways...4/10
Ya got pointy ears and your a dork I'm devourin and seizin the pure elf
I'd call you a POS.......but how the hell can you be a piece of yourself
a lil played to nd the punch wasnt to strong...5/10
Clock gets crushed n runs away so I stay to rip apart n' roundin the bar
Only way C smashin 'LF' is if his hands pop out n' start poundin the car
yea i get what u was tryna do but it was still wack...4/10

FINAL SCORE- 27/50

Lay Fear gets the vote
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Old 05-01-07, 02:47 PM   #18
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Voted For: Lay Fear

lay took this one......you had a few more punches then he did

clock didnt stay consistant he went a diff direction toward the middle of his verse....keep it movin tho nice job...
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