10 lines
no crew
no d/r
u spit first
check in and spit

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i'll check in but wish you to spit first since you are more experienced.

ayo discharged has just uncharged, can't stop his age from riseing/
you get charged like a scotish reble battle commencing/
if i learned fencing, i'd chop your ballz into quaters/
then again im an mc slaughter, i'll just spred shit saying i fucked your daughter/
i'm a mistery i only come out, when im on a killing spree on a dark night/
when i do, take you down with me, taking you 10 under quickly/
ripp your little legs off make a sand castle, scaring your reletives saying I bought you a new house look/
my mind wipes you out in a secord, won't let you be famous vreating a new record/
i'll make a new record for you, it's called ignored/
this battle has put you ina unbreakable cage, just keep it that way before I release some rage/

the truth is im gonna have to kill this clown named popa dock//
he has no good rhymes in stock,hes an expert at ridin cock...//
u dont have the slightest chance, and i want you to realize that//
your not gonna last,so stop rhymin and pull the cock out ur ass//
whats a "secord"?................ you must make up your own vocab//
your not a gangsta................. not hard................... or not "bad"//
im talent...... u should be able to see that with your own eyes//
ur not a rapper or not tupac,..........its all a fucking disquise//
this was not hard to beat you ............it was an "easy-win"//
next time think....... before you pm me askin to battle again//

no disrespect but your verse was weak so i went easy just try to elevate

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this battle hella sucked..damn dawg..discharge hella killed u in this one.........

discharge:
flow:7/10
punches 7/10
structure 7/10
overall*7*
bestline:this was not hard to beat you ............it was an "easy-win"//
next time think....... before you pm me askin to battle again//

u did terrible this time
popa doc
flow 7/10
punches 6/10
structure5/10
overall*6*
thats was also terrible elevate
ur best line:this battle has put you ina unbreakable cage, just keep it that way before I release some rage/
my vote discharge

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Discharge - Good spit man, you had some good punches in there.. and your flow was flowin..lol

Best Line - the truth is im gonna have to kill this clown named popa dock//
he has no good rhymes in stock,hes an expert at ridin cock...//

Worst Line - u dont have the slightest chance, and i want you to realize that//
your not gonna last,so stop rhymin and pull the cock out ur ass//

Poppa Doc - bad spit man, you had not good flow.. and you didnt have any good punches.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - ayo discharged has just uncharged, can't stop his age from riseing/
you get charged like a scotish reble battle commencing/
if i learned fencing, i'd chop your ballz into quaters/
then again im an mc slaughter, i'll just spred shit saying i fucked your daughter/
i'm a mistery i only come out, when im on a killing spree on a dark night/
when i do, take you down with me, taking you 10 under quickly/
ripp your little legs off make a sand castle, scaring your reletives saying I bought you a new house look/
my mind wipes you out in a secord, won't let you be famous vreating a new record/
i'll make a new record for you, it's called ignored/
this battle has put you ina unbreakable cage, just keep it that way before I release some rage/

OVERALL - one sided battle.. for Dischange.. he had an overall better verse.. his punches were harder.. his flow was better.. and just merked poppa doc.. pop you need to work on your flow alot.. and you need some better punch lines.

VOTE - Discharge

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I agree totally with this
v/Discarge for a better verse

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123432
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121587
hit them up please

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popadoc u needa elevate bro.. ur flow was ight but structure lacked and u had no good punches.... overall: 6/10

discharge:
the truth is im gonna have to kill this clown named popa dock//
he has no good rhymes in stock,hes an expert at ridin cock...//
-oh.. that bar killt him
overall ur flow was ight and good structure and overall it was good
overall:7/10
vote-discharge

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Opener- Discharge- nice opener man, solid hit
Flow- Discharger, it wasn't as choppy made it easier to read
Punches- Discharger, more crisp consise punches, the tupac line was nice
Personals- Not really any here
Multi's-No real multi's but punches are the bet for winning battles
Complexity- Tie- they both seemed well thought out.
Mettas- Tie- you both had good idea
Finisher- Same thing that gave Discharge the other catagories, crisper punches that connect
Overall- Discharge
Vote- Discharge

ok dis was a uniqe battle

popadoc-u had in alright drop u threw swings of punches every now and then but overall nice drop

bestline-ayo discharged has just uncharged, can't stop his age from riseing/
you get charged like a scotish reble battle commencing/

descent start bout a 7/10

fall off line-you get charged like a scotish reble battle commencing/
if i learned fencing, i'd chop your ballz into quaters/

5/10

worsteline-then again im an mc slaughter, i'll just spred shit saying i fucked your daughter/

way off 4/10

overall yo verse gets a 6/10

discharge-the truth is im gonna have to kill this clown named popa dock//
he has no good rhymes in stock,hes an expert at ridin cock...//

aite descent bout a 8/10

falloff-none

worsteline-none

overall yo verse stayed at 8/10

winner-discharge

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ok flow=discharge, it reads easier
vocab=discharge(neither were that good)
structure=discharge because at least it was even unlike popas which was terrrible
punches=discharge, he buit his punches up n hit way harder, truth is papa doc needs help lmfao
my vote= discharge !RETURN THE FAVOUR PIMP JUICE!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123580 HIT ME UP HOMIES

discharge all the way in this one.....popa doc elevate kid try to get some punches in your verse dont talk about yourself......dis got this all the way with harder punches more creativity and just an overall better verse