ripped this beat cuz i love it so had to do sumthing wit it....................
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=472818




linkz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467
dudes acapella^^^^

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220476
speats snippet^^^^

__________________

decent track loved the beat verses were shackey at points we gotta work to get you a 50 cent flow lol j/p

But I like the track some hard shyt G nice job and keep reppin

__________________

Tony Green's Soundclick

no 50 flow my flow is fine...................................thanx fer tha feeed uppin

__________________

beat is tight...real tight...i wouldnt say you raped the beat...need a bit of work on your delivery but you ride the beat well...like that hook...need to elevate as far as punches they were kinda plain...not really feelin it so much sorry...

__________________
I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

for the most part... but im vibin to it...

hook is nice... im feelin that...

not relly feelin the lyrics that much... but its coo...

nothin relly outstandin ...

stay up..

Feed used 1/27/06 "You Will Fall Bacc"

__________________

-=!!The Last Life Line!!=-
.::WHo WaNT WHuT? - STeP N B STePPeD oN::.
-=!!OVeRaLL BaTTLe ReCoRD!!=-
34 WiNS, 8 LoSSeS, 28 Ko'S

"I'll leave u lost in your own world, makin u crazy..
Leave ya ass trapped ina tire like the "Michellin Baby".. - VitaL
CheCC Me @ Soundclick

werd thanx fer tha feed................................

__________________

Aight this beat is coo...flow and delivery is aight...lyrics is str8...the hook is coo...second verse is coo delivery is aight...quality is decent...over-all nice ish man keep it up.

-uNo-

werd thanx bumppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

__________________

nice track yo

dilivery is nice
lyrics is good
hook is deece

overall good track homie, keep on keeping on
Feed used 1/31/06 "John Doe (A-Bomb Diss)"

__________________

dis beats coo...lyricz is ok lines werent dat really hard hittin 2 me...flows coo not dat bad...deliverys aiiight...da hooks str8...but i cant really take sum1 serious on a bow wow beat...but overall dis was coo 4 da mos part...keep it up

lmao werd i just like tha beat so i did it for shits and gigglez..........
thanx fo feed

__________________

beats coo, not my style but its cool.

flows pretty str8, off a few times.
lyrics r pretty coo.
voice is coo
hook is pretty nice, scept u shudda made that very last line better

overall tghis track was nice. keep at it ull elavate n be even better

__________________

werd thanx fam...................

__________________

theres nothing in ur voice that makes me WANT to hear this.
its.. bland.
the break in ur verse when you spitting is eh
U need to fix up the way you write ya verse.
that chorus is bleh. Sound better if you got more hyped.
is the second verse another person?
the fuck is he saying..
blah could be better

Feed used 1/27/06 "How We Shoot Rmx"

__________________

Trust me, Im much fucking better then you.

G.M.S.

who tha fuck r you?????????negative bizznatch

__________________