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09-19-05, 11:58 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Stop Faking it
IP: CD98 49E3
chorus:
Their rhyming about shit, rhyming about techs what they think talking bout guns is gunna get em respect Big talkers with big mouths, who ain't got no skill coz their just like ghosts in a way...their not real Their talking about journeys where not their not walking it they just need to quit the bullshit n stop talking it Verse 1: Their talking shit but not realising whats at stake because under the pressure their probally gunna break They just need to give it a rest n stop the heart ache Your not a mass murderer, we know your not a killer You just need to switch ya perspective up n look in the mirror Just talk about ya struggles then release the force coz if you can't talk about that then don't speak at all Coz noones gunna feel you, you'll just get exposed ti'll the point that you'll explode,you'll be creeping on ya toes Deal with ya problems if you ain't happy with ya life just dont go round faking it, look what happened to vanilla ice Said he was in a gang, said he was killing guys Instead he was exposed, just a fake who didn't rise Chorus repeated: Verse 2: If your living in a hellzone with sleepless nights Then don't talk gangsta just talk ya life All that bullshit, it's just left for the newbies just talk about ya own shit, it makes good music Nobody really knows me, im kinda low stat but my books have got more scribble than a childs notepad My rhymes??...I talk about myself so people are gunna feel this Now my Saliva spills quick..coz I talk about the situations that i've had to deal with Life can be traumatizing n life can be stressing But just talk about ya shit, thats the art of expressing ya inner thoughs n depth, just put it on a track N speak about ya real life...just drop the act Chorus repeated |
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09-19-05, 12:00 PM | #2 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: CD98 49E3
ayo i give permission for somebody to make this into an audio track spitting my rhymes coz I ain't got the facillities to do it with. So If ya can I would appreciate it coz I wanna hear how my rhymes flow to a beat...feedback, peace
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09-19-05, 08:40 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop 2 link or this will be closed
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09-19-05, 09:15 PM | #4 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
look homey this is not ready first off the chorus is too long, you were concentrating so much on the content you for got all about the flow but you have potentials doe keep up the good work
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