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Old 02-28-09, 01:18 PM   #1
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Implicit - Rescue Me

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Here it is:

www.myspace.com/reflekt88

Song should play when you open the page.
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Old 02-28-09, 03:19 PM   #2
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i liked what i heard of this so far....internet is crapping out. so ill feed up later
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Old 02-28-09, 07:53 PM   #3
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i like the intro, the way you come in is smooth pretty good flow.
im feelin the content alot.

its easy to relate to.
ahh the hook. im feeelin that shit.
i love the way it harmonizes/singing and shit.

my favorite part by far.
it has a little more emotion feel to it.

second verse is straight, the flow is switched a tad and sounds good.
content is still straight.

good track.
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Old 02-28-09, 08:39 PM   #4
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Why Largusa? Anyways, word I'm christian too. So word this shit good. Cut out halfway thru 3rd verse, iunno why.

This beat sounds tight for this. Wow... you sound like someone. I forget who. I can't remember who. OH you remind me of Ghostface. Lol word.... but yea, word to soil seed shit. flow cool.

The hook was tight. Seriously I liked it. Catchy. I just think you could have dubbed it more. Made it stand out from the verse.

Overall this was a nice track man. I'd bump shit like this. There's actually a lot of good christian rap. So word to actually putting yourself out there with this type of music. Good shit son. Keep it up.

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Old 03-05-09, 04:52 AM   #5
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ive heard some dope chrstian rappers lately and even though im not a christian i am open to any good music.voice and flow are good.ad libs sound minorly off here in places but i dont know if you wanted it that way or not.i like the lyrics here.hook is cool and beat is real smooth.if you could i would like to use to do some poetry on.....holla at me.
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Old 03-05-09, 11:19 AM   #6
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Yeah no doubt. Anytime.
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Old 03-05-09, 05:30 PM   #7
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yo my email is caliph80@aol.com

send me the beat homie...
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