Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

You lose, sorry about that.

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His last battle.

verse so soft, plus ya flows off, i'll have ya aching kid
seriously, your lines gotta be font size two, just to make em fit
even failed at fakin it, ya minds empty they say
rhymes going pro? not when i peep your rhyme sceme, n c aa
slap down this bitch ho, just so this kid know
i'll make you such an O, C... that you become a hit show
i've heard of no win, but this 'bout to get hairy yo
cuz i'm facing more like a lose, lose, lose, lose, lose, lose scenario
kinda scary though, you still get props.. its true, but
i looked at your last battle and...



AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH YOU SUCK!

^ that's called a personal, see

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it's 10 lines people, just new at trying this structure, kinda shitty but still reasonable


i hear ya the best if so why were u only nominated twice for the 2 mil dollar prediction
kid is weak minded, gives into peer pressure, type to o'd off his father's perscription
like throwing paper balls at wrestlers, ya verses are weak attempts to try and throw away
.................................................. .................................................. .....ya opposition
a legend how when giving bj's to men with a grenade in ya hand is the only time u blow
.................................................. ..............................................away ya competition
like car tires or super balls thrown into tar pits ya talent has ya career barely rolling
it's funny, i'm wondering how ya ranked 11th when ya reign on top'll end up shorter
.................................................. ...............................................the n gary coleman
cocky huh, ya got jokes or at least they mad me laugh but take that shit to comic view
we all know ya not here for ya passion of rapping, ya here for the dough to pay off ya
.................................................. ....................................rent for u and momma too
now if u look close i'm not really sick in the head but for this murder i'll take pleasure
how are u susspose to be the best when u don't measure up like a broken tape measure

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v/ g-unit 101

he had better punches and personals..........he came with better wit.....and wordplay.......

re-born- you had one good punch the gary colemen line.........but that was about it....you didnt come as creative as g-unit did .....

v/g-unit101

even failed at fakin it, ya minds empty they say
rhymes going pro? not when i peep your rhyme sceme, n c aa
slap down this bitch ho, just so this kid know
i'll make you such an O, C... that you become a hit show
i've heard of no win, but this 'bout to get hairy yo
cuz i'm facing more like a lose, lose, lose, lose, lose, lose scenario

vs.

Nothing of Cenarios..

That garbage was wack.. Nothing but shit wordplay..

Vote - Gunit.

ok structure tie first dudes lines wer uneven reborn stretched as hell
vocab reborn by far lol
punches and personla g unit his verse was filled with personals where as reborn didnt have m,any and quite a few lines were played
flow not that its that big of a deal in text gunit reborns shit didnt flow due to his stretched lines
vote gunit for better flow and of course punches and personals thats waht wins u the battle

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hey im only seeing 3 explanations and 4 votes who voted that wasnt supposed to?

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someone accidently voted so i deleted the post.. its still 3-0 though one more vote for a K.O

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

basically gunit101. won this and i dont think there is a need for me to go into a long explanation for it but cenario that new structure killed your verse ... no matter how small you make the text size its still stretched... and your punches were just decent nothing really stood out... gunit101. your verse wasnt that great either but you had 1 or 2 good punches and better structure thats why i think you won

v/ gunit101.

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion