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Killa bitch ima beat ya ass from japan back to cali
world war two.. shit ill treat you like pearl harbor and mauii
bomb ya ass.. bitch i drop planes on you mutha fucka
u make me spit first so if im ill you just gon duck wha?
ima press thes loss on ya like a tatoo permentanly there
battle records they stay there soo bitches will stare
ima punch ya till ya throw up.. okay now your ill
i think thiss bitch is running a fever, here i'll give you advill
Thats the only way you'll become i'll so stop bothering
shit your not ill hell i lost to a chic and i still be the one fathering

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Nuff Said

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im glad that took u fucking 40 minutes to write.. jeez im going to bed

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Sorry, Im a Slow Typer..
I didnt see you Spit Untill 1-am..


UPPIN FOR VOTES

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wow, this was a rather boring battle..

BUT, TiLL defenitly owned this one. CaLi, all them ' ' were a huge distraction, and i felt like you were choppy and your stuff was major forced.

TiLL, funny opener...and the throw up line is OLD, heard it alot..But overall, vote goes to TiLL..

-latez-

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

Cali - alot of played concepts.. the name flips werent v.effective.. 'cereal killer' an 'dick' line let u down.. flow was off cos it was a struggle to read..

Die - opener was ok.. nice concept.. but ya 4th line stank.. dont jus use words like "wha" cos it rhymes.. think it thru more.. vocab was limited an the wordin needs to be more concise to make the punches effective.. but u did enuff to win this one..

VoTe = TiLLEyEDiE

drop a vote here a.s.a.p:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120

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up it

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Killa bitch ima beat ya ass from japan back to cali
world war two.. shit ill treat you like pearl harbor and mauii
eh.. not that effective of an openign i though.. at least for texts anyway. metaphor is BASIC and the set up is a filler
bomb ya ass.. bitch i drop planes on you mutha fucka
u make me spit first so if im ill you just gon duck wha?
not impressed by this bar truthfully. It seemed basic, the punch wasnt that hard at all, i thought the set was going some were but it sort of fell off
ima press thes loss on ya like a tatoo permentanly there
battle records they stay there soo bitches will stare
wtf????? now not feeling your set bar, it was alright for a concept but was down with the wording. follow through was weak in general
ima punch ya till ya throw up.. okay now your ill
i think thiss bitch is running a fever, here i'll give you advill
heh, this wasnt that bad at all.. a little bit of a played concept but i liek how you directed it and was feelin the punch
Thats the only way you'll become i'll so stop bothering
shit your not ill hell i lost to a chic and i still be the one fathering
self boasting wasnt really digging it. nice connectiong throw the bars but it didnt really go any were after that

Over all you have a little bit diffrent approach than most emcees, it seemed more audioish that text. your punchs werent the hardest and really your metaphors lacked. Most of them were played or just to basic



Im'a 'KiLL' this kid Who 'Dies'.. Poked Your 'Eye'..
Ha.. I 'stabbed' Ya name 'UNTIL HE DIED'..
openign wasnt much really, alrigth attemped to play off his name but it wasnt that hard as a punch, metaphor was alright
Keep 'running'.. asian your Just Orange 'Chicken'..
'Jude-o' Choped your Shit.. Then Left Ya Mojo Missin.. (austin powers)
judo chop? wtf? LoL that was an alright bar. Metaphor was alright but you showing us the metaphor, do audio songs stop in the middle and say "hey, get it liek this, not like that"
A 'Cereal' Killa I am.. fagget, 'Tricks' are For Kid's..
I'ts Just a 'Rumor' But.. ya Flow's smaller then ya 'Dick Is'..
punch is alright.. cereal killer part is played, and really didnt hold much of a punch. follow through sort of made up for it though
Your 'Beggin' to Win.. Just like your Record, you 'Gotta Win'.. (1 win)
Your friends Tellin you Your 'Gay'.. There sayin, "You aint 'Toppin' Him!"..
alright personal shot iguess.. not that hard on a diss though. follow through was sort of weak, but an alright attemp
Now seeing that your not 'Above' Me.. wacks a Word You Must Be..
You 'died' so there's NO 'TiLL'.. and for your 'EYE', you suck 'SEE'..
ending wasnt the greatest, i felt that you really needed to add more of a direct punch in your shit. alright trying to play off his name i guess

Over all you had some alright punchs. Metaphors were there but you making people see situation, instead of letting them come to there own conclusion. Flow was alright, but the way you set your verse(structure) was alright, but could be worked a little better to show off your flow more.

Vote- Killa_cali

Over all i just thought that he came with much better metaphors, he took more personal shots at TilleyeDie and came out with a more unique structure. Lack on flow a little bit and could have had better direction with his punchs, but the overall was him winning i thought.

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Finally.. SomeOne who's Explians a Vote Correctly..
TILLeyeDIE.. Your SIGGY is Coo, But that Shouldnt Let you Win Battles.. lol..


UpPIN FA vOtEs...

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aiigh not a bad battle ive seen alot worse.
tilleyedie you had a good flow it was pretty smooth,your opener and closer were aiight but could of bin better.although you had hard hittin punches which count in a battle!
Killa_cali your flow was patchy,your opener and closer were weak and need to be improved (no h8).your punches were hard but some were missin the target....
Vote....tilleyedie

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Return the favour on this please seen as i peeped ur stuff.!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113483

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EveryOne here must be ClueLess.. honestly..


theres 48 Views, but yet only 3 votes.. Seems Like People are scared to Show there True Self.. instead they Dickryde a Kid witta Phat Avvy and Sig.. WTF!..LoL..
I won this battle easily.. its plain to see any vet would Know..
im not swaying.. i juss want to make this clear.. your flow lacked what a BATTLE IS..
Think before you vote.. PLEEZ..


UppIn For REAL VOTES..plz.

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Killa bitch ima beat ya ass from japan back to cali
world war two.. shit ill treat you like pearl harbor and mauii
eh.. not that effective of an openign i though.. at least for texts anyway. metaphor is BASIC and the set up is a filler
bomb ya ass.. bitch i drop planes on you mutha fucka
u make me spit first so if im ill you just gon duck wha?
not impressed by this bar truthfully. It seemed basic, the punch wasnt that hard at all, i thought the set was going some were but it sort of fell off
ima press thes loss on ya like a tatoo permentanly there
battle records they stay there soo bitches will stare
wtf????? now not feeling your set bar, it was alright for a concept but was down with the wording. follow through was weak in general
ima punch ya till ya throw up.. okay now your ill
i think thiss bitch is running a fever, here i'll give you advill
heh, this wasnt that bad at all.. a little bit of a played concept but i liek how you directed it and was feelin the punch
Thats the only way you'll become i'll so stop bothering
shit your not ill hell i lost to a chic and i still be the one fathering
self boasting wasnt really digging it. nice connectiong throw the bars but it didnt really go any were after that

Over all you have a little bit diffrent approach than most emcees, it seemed more audioish that text. your punchs werent the hardest and really your metaphors lacked. Most of them were played or just to basic



Im'a 'KiLL' this kid Who 'Dies'.. Poked Your 'Eye'..
Ha.. I 'stabbed' Ya name 'UNTIL HE DIED'..
openign wasnt much really, alrigth attemped to play off his name but it wasnt that hard as a punch, metaphor was alright
Keep 'running'.. asian your Just Orange 'Chicken'..
'Jude-o' Choped your Shit.. Then Left Ya Mojo Missin.. (austin powers)
judo chop? wtf? LoL that was an alright bar. Metaphor was alright but you showing us the metaphor, do audio songs stop in the middle and say "hey, get it liek this, not like that"
A 'Cereal' Killa I am.. fagget, 'Tricks' are For Kid's..
I'ts Just a 'Rumor' But.. ya Flow's smaller then ya 'Dick Is'..
punch is alright.. cereal killer part is played, and really didnt hold much of a punch. follow through sort of made up for it though
Your 'Beggin' to Win.. Just like your Record, you 'Gotta Win'.. (1 win)
Your friends Tellin you Your 'Gay'.. There sayin, "You aint 'Toppin' Him!"..
alright personal shot iguess.. not that hard on a diss though. follow through was sort of weak, but an alright attemp
Now seeing that your not 'Above' Me.. wacks a Word You Must Be..
You 'died' so there's NO 'TiLL'.. and for your 'EYE', you suck 'SEE'..
ending wasnt the greatest, i felt that you really needed to add more of a direct punch in your shit. alright trying to play off his name i guess

Over all you had some alright punchs. Metaphors were there but you making people see situation, instead of letting them come to there own conclusion. Flow was alright, but the way you set your verse(structure) was alright, but could be worked a little better to show off your flow more.

Vote- Killa_cali



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Finally..from someone who's 4-0.....
LETS GET SOME VOTERS IN HERE WHO KNOW WHAT THERYRE TALKIN ABOUT.

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