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Old 08-05-02, 01:56 AM   #1
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Today my soul was coloured black with grief/
Coloured a misty cloud like a deep ocean coral reef/
A dark, solemn colour...one to mirror my thoughts/
Thoughts that can only be connected by slashing the dots/
Tired and weary, my soul is aching from stress/
Sad as it is and slowly getting more depressed/
And as I'm sitting here talking about colour, I'm sickened/
Trying to clear the smoke and the emotion has thickened/
Oh the colours, so bright and beautiful in hue/
While I'm quickly dying inside, unlike the rest of you/
I'm trying to keep my composure, but i'm feeling the strain though/
Rip my spirit to pieces and place all my colours in the rainbow/
 
Old 08-05-02, 02:05 AM   #2
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aww shit, that was next level, i'm feeling this
only thing i think u shoulda done to make this hotter was add like other feelings and compare them to other colors, but this still was tight.

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Old 08-05-02, 02:36 AM   #3
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Tight Shit Girl , "While I'm quickly dying inside, unlike the rest of you" . . . Even Though I'm More Like You Than You Think ! This Was Really Good , Keep Writing And I'll Keep Reading !

Peace & Love !
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