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Old 08-10-04, 08:48 AM   #1
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Shabba Ranks(3-1-1) Vs Boston Lyricist(4-1) heavyweight contendership

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battles go up monday
check in by wensday
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no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
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REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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Old 08-10-04, 11:18 AM   #2
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check.
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Old 08-10-04, 11:34 AM   #3
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bringin da hood with intelligence boi..bl checke in son
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Old 08-10-04, 04:55 PM   #4
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This guy is a fake thug, hes thinks hes threatening when he types...
You bring intelligence right?...half of that sentence wasnt spelled right(see his check in)...
RV could be the best, but we're stuck waitin for you...
I mean, how can u lace a track, when ya sig cant lace his boots...
And thats the truth, youll never be able to contend with me...
Your wackness caused this site...to change its whole identity...
And if we were namin the wackest...ud have to be the worst...
Sdizzle almost merked you...and he had 1/4 of wut u wrote for a verse...
He thinks hes legendary...well ya life must be a dumb lie...
He can play me in this battle...if he uses a classic "cum" line...
You aint never shoot the 1, i kno u soft dog...
Ill leave you laid out on the green like well hit golf balls...
This guy rhymes is hot ass, he thinks his ass hot...
Hes respected highly...as high as the Boston Celtics mascot(leprechaun)...
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Old 08-11-04, 02:35 PM   #5
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i already know how this gonna go

How you gonna act like you one of rap battles mc bosses
When your flow is garbage and you have more losses
JERZ..is not even recognized as a state people think it’s a city
And when you relize your flow is horrible watch as ya avitar claps wit me
Mr non topical,non skillfull cant rap on audio or subject
Cant set up a battle cause your rap battle money is on a budget..
The only mc to get a noise polution ticket for freestyling in public
All ya votes will probably be a dick ryde friend
But ill jus laugh and look at ya battlele wit triple N(http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140327)
Champs in ya state are slim non existant,chances are rocky
Only way for you to get to the top is if you played hockey
This aint jamica but I'll smoke to your dealth like you did marley's
Honestly I bet your rap career last aslong as chris farleys
You don’t wanna rump wit me,I be da bomba ta smoke ya
I'll make ya dread lock extentions come alive and choke ya
You fag on ebay bought a jamican flag color skirt
That way ziggy would smoke a blunt from ya ass at his concert….


Its gonna be what it be…..
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Old 08-11-04, 02:45 PM   #6
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Shabba

This guy is a fake thug, hes thinks hes threatening when he types...
You bring intelligence right?...half of that sentence wasnt spelled right(see his check in)...
ha ha funny shit
RV could be the best, but we're stuck waitin for you...
I mean, how can u lace a track, when ya sig cant lace his boots...
lol aight
And thats the truth, youll never be able to contend with me...
Your wackness caused this site...to change its whole identity...
pretty good

And if we were namin the wackest...ud have to be the worst...
Sdizzle almost merked you...and he had 1/4 of wut u wrote for a verse...
lol personal nice
He thinks hes legendary...well ya life must be a dumb lie...
He can play me in this battle...if he uses a classic "cum" line...
lol aight
You aint never shoot the 1, i kno u soft dog...
Ill leave you laid out on the green like well hit golf balls...
meh...ok
This guy rhymes is hot ass, he thinks his ass hot...
Hes respected highly...as high as the Boston Celtics mascot(leprechaun)...
ha ha..aight

pretty decent verse...had some nice personals and punches

7.5/10


BL

How you gonna act like you one of rap battles mc bosses
When your flow is garbage and you have more losses
blah...
JERZ..is not even recognized as a state people think it’s a city
And when you relize your flow is horrible watch as ya avitar claps wit me
wtf was this...no punch
Mr non topical,non skillfull cant rap on audio or subject
Cant set up a battle cause your rap battle money is on a budget..
meh
The only mc to get a noise polution ticket for freestyling in public
All ya votes will probably be a dick ryde friend
But ill jus laugh and look at ya battlele wit triple N
(http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140327)
gay
Champs in ya state are slim non existant,chances are rocky
Only way for you to get to the top is if you played hockey
meh
This aint jamica but I'll smoke to your dealth like you did marley's
Honestly I bet your rap career last aslong as chris farleys
gay
You don’t wanna rump wit me,I be da bomba ta smoke ya
I'll make ya dread lock extentions come alive and choke ya
ha..no
You fag on ebay bought a jamican flag color skirt
That way ziggy would smoke a blunt from ya ass at his concert….
wtf? fake personals?

gay verse....fo real man you didnt have any punches i liked at all

6.0/10

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Old 08-11-04, 10:22 PM   #7
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Blah...

B.L Your Verse Was Decent A Couple Decent punches None Were Too Great... You Kept Talking Bout Jamaica And That Made Your Verse Weaker...Decent Flow Structure Was Good Pretty Consistent 1 Decent Personal...Coulda Been Better..

overall : 6/10

S.R: Your Verse Was Good... Some Hot Punches And Good Personals...Structure Was Choppy In A Couple Places But Your Verse Was Better Overall...Good Flow...Decent W/P...Obviously Won

Overall : 7.5/10

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Old 08-11-04, 11:14 PM   #8
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BL your verse was below par for me u had a couple punches not alot structure was off u had like one personal your flow was aight overall i think u could have done a lot better in this

shabba your verse was good u had some good punches structure was choppy flow was so so had some good personal's but u had tha betta punches an personal's and they win battles their for....

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Old 08-12-04, 11:20 AM   #9
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OMG how did BL even get a contership shot. This is shit. Shabba fuckin owned this kid & he didnt even come nice.

See u next week Shabba.

This guy is a fake thug, hes thinks hes threatening when he types...
You bring intelligence right?...half of that sentence wasnt spelled right(see his check in)...
Sdizzle almost merked you...and he had 1/4 of wut u wrote for a verse...

^haha.

V/Shabba
 
Old 08-12-04, 12:01 PM   #10
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you bl's verse was blahhhhhh, your verse didnt flow well at all. shabba your verse was decent, okay personals, nothing great, but enough to take this. favorite line was
your opener. rest was just okay. see ya next week.


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Old 08-12-04, 04:12 PM   #11
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thought this was weak if im honest...

shabba...

good shit mainly, gud flow n some nice personals, like the 1st bar n the whole identity change change nice, but golf line was wack, but nice verse overall..

7/10

B.L....

with verses like that man u really shouldnt be here in this position, not really any hard punches n quite a few played out lines...flow was on point but the punches weren't there wiv one weak personal about triple N...

5/10

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Old 08-12-04, 05:26 PM   #12
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Boston Lyricist.. U Had Some good punches and personals but that wassent good to cut it u need a better flow ya shit was tight dont get me wronge Shabba is tight so bring the Heat next time good shit i like ya punches and personals the best thing u had so

6.5/10

Shabba.... u hadd TIGHT ASS PUNCHES lol the first lines was great Closer and everything else it was the perfect verse nice flow and u knew how much Skill u had to bring in to this battle so u get this by Far

8.5/10

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Old 08-13-04, 09:02 AM   #13
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yo shabba murked u but i cant vote ....but i was j/w if u boston lyricist [im from boston] y u forever have a pikture of a dude in a ny jets jersey??? atleasst rep
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Old 08-13-04, 12:27 PM   #14
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and you from boston but have a knicks avitar....lamo!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-13-04, 12:28 PM   #15
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good shit shabba...everyone is right i didnt bring no fire..honestly i jus wasnt in to this battle at the time...but good shit son good win ...i'll get at you next time...close this shit shabba got it
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