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11-27-05, 10:16 AM
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Intermental feat. Gutta - Breakin Me Down
IP: 74C0 001C
Damn this track is hot...what can I say, when you gettin youre game increasing daily, people wanna break you down, so basically I lay down first two verses and the hook and Gutta got last verse..he rocks it great..peep game..
WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL "BREAKIN ME DOWN" http://community.rapverse.com/showt...261#post2554261 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215499
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11-27-05, 10:21 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 5F4F 7BA8
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You Deliverys Dope lyrcis Are Dope Presence Hot!!!!! Flows Good Love The Dubs And The Int Bit Thas Dope Love It Your Hooks Dope 2nd verse same As Above Dope Dubs Are Jus On Left Thats Dope THe phone Bits Dope Hook Again Gutta On Word  Flows Dope Lyrics Are Aight Dont Feel Em Much Deliverys Dope Presence Dope Word Yeah Inter You Outshined Him 8/10 Keep Elevating Its Goin On My Mp3 Player Word
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11-27-05, 10:22 AM
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IP: 74C0 001C
Word thanks alot man................
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11-27-05, 10:30 AM
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IP: C40A 7675
Wow my man you have elevated so much
Hard work paying off Delivery was the best aspect of this imo, really felt the delivery on this went well with the topic Flow was kewel Lyrics was feeling them Beat was sick Gutter- Feeling your voice sounded a lil like lil flip imo Lyrics were ok but flow and delivery was dope Hook was dope This was a real enojoyable track respect |
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11-27-05, 10:31 AM
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IP: 74C0 001C
thanks dawg...im feelin that...i apreicate it
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11-27-05, 10:32 AM
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IP: AF58 598D
okay...
beat is ok...nothing special i dont really like ur voice but that didnt really bothered me now cauze flow was great, kl lyrics but u could still elevate with ur quality hook is nice...i really liked Gutta ur flow is nice, and nice lyrics ,quality is kl nice track inter..u r really elevating man.. keep shit up...nah mean
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11-27-05, 10:33 AM
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IP: 74C0 001C
thanks.................
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11-27-05, 02:30 PM
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I ain't feeling the sample...
You whispering on the track and shit, coulda rode the beat nicer than that...don't like ya voice really...where are you from? The thing about the way you spit is that you whispering so much it's hard to decipher what you saying.. Gutta came type hot...shit was nice...flow was good. Hook is coo... Overall - iight... Return feed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215549
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11-27-05, 05:08 PM
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IP: 9DCA 6674
thanks ill rtf tomoz...............
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11-27-05, 05:17 PM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: 5350 A834
did u make this beat?
yo voice goes good wif this beat. nice emoton 1st verse iz nice chorus iz dope 2nd verse iz nice like tha 1st 1. u got good flow on both tha verses n tha chorus. 3rd verse, koo voice, flow iz good, good lyrics. rtf pleeze! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548 thanx, werd
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11-28-05, 12:38 AM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
beat is okay
inter...ur levels are good in this...And, I was about to tell you that u need to get ur levels right to make ur music more enjoyable to listen to verse is okay...ur flow is fine on it, delivery adequate, if not uninspired rhyming stepped up some...I can hear some multies here and there...good my lil chipmunk workin overtime...haaa gutta...levels/quality = not bad flow is pretty good pretty solid fellas **Be on the look out for my new joint yerp 1 |
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11-28-05, 01:44 PM
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IP: 9C64 FCFF
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word..,im peepin that straight away when im back..and yo kool col b i got u too my spanish cuz..lol..1 i apreciate the feed..i w9orked out the levels now...
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