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Old 01-09-06, 07:02 PM   #1
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Lightbulb Dat New Heat!!!!from Trip!!!!a Must Peep For All!!!!!!!!!!!

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This is a lil track I put together....hope ya feel it



Song title: everything's Alrite
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Old 01-09-06, 07:13 PM   #2
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quality is tyte voice seems a lil different not as extra grimey flow is solid adlibs work nice flow is hott moves off words nicely......trip the more u experiment the more i like ya shit goin a bit off the grain gonna beep u sharp dawg keep it up i swear everytime i here ya shit i try and treak my shit for quality lol holla at me u know my aim
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Old 01-09-06, 09:41 PM   #3
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damnn this shit was hott, yah voice was real calm and shit and the beat was blendin well with it, your delivery has always been hott, you got the natural feel on the mic, the hook is hott as hell, catchy as shit, quality perfect to me, everythings alright ,,,,, yeahhhh shits hott

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Old 01-09-06, 09:54 PM   #4
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dope intro..........
beat sounds sikk so far.....
yeah flow is hott.....
lyrics r fuking amazing....
hook is nice.......
man u r by far tha best audio head on here fucking dopeness man step up was my fav but this was fucking sikkness to man like i said lyrics r amazing in your trackz man
u come full tilt errytime fam 10/10 perfect track
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Old 01-09-06, 09:54 PM   #5
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quality is tight, nice flow

lyrics are tight, i would understand it if i listen longer, but i aint got much time, but i do understand most of it...

keep droppin
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Old 01-10-06, 08:58 AM   #6
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Beats tight... Flows tight...

Keepin it all pro man... You know.... There aint much I can say critisism-wise and I aint the type to sit here spoutin off on some fan shit.. But I def got respect for you as an artist and I've liked everythin ya doin with ya music.. I think its crazy your stayin indie tho.. You got a style that could sky rocket if it had the right label backing you...

But either way.. Keep doin ya thing man.. This song was nice....
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Old 01-10-06, 09:54 AM   #7
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listenin....beat is nice...feelin the intro...voice is really good cos when you hear it you know its triple...flow is crazy...im feelin it...you ridin this beat nice...presence is very good like i said ure voice makes people know its you...and it gathers attention which is dope...im feelin the delivery...its comes across nicely...man this track is rlly nice..lyrics are really nice...i like the hook its catchy i rlly like it man...downloadin.,..lol i got every track on ure soundclick and thensome ha...
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Old 01-10-06, 10:07 AM   #8
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Trip listening: DAYUM @ The beat this is ill...flow is sickness rhyming tight...hook is nice...quality and effects are mixed nicely...i still can't get over the resemblence of ya voice to X but you deffo carry a different style to man so it's not really an emulation of the man you do your own thing...delivery as well was v.good not much you can slant on this coz overall it was a decent track to listen to...actually very professional from someone who ain't signed...which is good...

deffo keep droppin nice track nominationable perhaps...
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Old 01-10-06, 10:13 AM   #9
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Beat is kool.Flow hot something different.Lyrics even u know are dope! Emotion is on par.Delivery always dope with ya dawg! Hook is fuking great!

im loving the track!

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Old 01-10-06, 04:58 PM   #10
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let me mention one thing, yea it's dope. not your best but shit it's a dope single. I'd like to see you do more fo a banger style track for a single man, them ones you do come out tight as fuck. but for this track I thought that your flow was dope the delivery was a bit different and that's what I like how you manage your voice to fit beatsa. quite important I think. but ayo man, remember our collabs and holla

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Old 01-10-06, 06:44 PM   #11
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Listening...

Beat is cool...flow and delivery is amazing...but I agree that your voice does sound different. Good lyrics...Feeling the hook. Good track man...everything is greatly well done.

Keep it up.

RTF please...

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Old 01-11-06, 01:02 AM   #12
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word.. qualiy is straight..


Chorus -i thought it was a decent chorus.. flow was aight in it.. rhyme scheme was original.. like the ending bars of the chorus..


verses - i didnt really liek your rhhyme schemes.. but thats just a personal thing.. for what you were doing, it worked.. flow was straight i thought.. lyrics were good.. had me bobbin sometimes..

overall not your best song in my opinion.. but it was a solid track..

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Old 01-11-06, 03:06 PM   #13
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Damn, you sound sexy as shit too...

Sound like xzibit kinda...got tha grimey voice to ya...

Lyrics is nice as hell, this beat is nice and mellow, it fits you perfectly..

Your real nice, I love your style, keep spitting my dude...
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Old 01-12-06, 06:30 PM   #14
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alrite ur voice sounded good on this beat like i told you on aim only thing i had a problem with was the high parts in the beat and hearing u because of lo fi
loved the fact that u changed up the flow
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Old 01-12-06, 07:02 PM   #15
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ryt leme give ya my two pence...

mixing is tight as fuck so good that ur verse as mixed aswell as professional hooks. keep it up man. plus u gotta gimme some mixing tips!! haha

anyway flow is on point. there was quite a few lyrics that u need to understand to appreiciate. but wen u do its hot.

i've prolly sed this b4 but ur one fo the most versitile emcees dat i have heard. u can do songs on a grimy tip, then make some catchy shit for a club banger, den u can slow it down for some deep lyrically shit. its all good man. like i sed b4 they only way u can improve is to jus keep putting out song after song. u shud try and keep a few more on ur soundclick aswell so peeps can see how u have improved to.

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