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Old 06-30-03, 01:12 AM   #1
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FINALS - Martinelli .vs. BlakListed .vs. Nojeel .vs. DjX

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Finals Schedule:

7:00 Maximum!

Match ups posted on Monday (june 30th)
Check in by Wednesday 12AM EST (MIDNIGHT)
Audios due by Saturday 12AM EST (MIDNIGHT) (July 5th)
Voting ends on Tuesday (July 8th)

Everything was extended based upon the Holidays and the fact that its the finals

VOTING WILL BE DONE LIKE SO:

1. Competitor
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THEN A FULL EXPLANATION!

IF ITS NOT EXPLAINED, IT DOESNT COUNT!

Competitors - EDIT YOUR CHECK IN POST WITH YOUR VERSE! DO NOT POST TWICE
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Old 06-30-03, 01:48 AM   #2
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Old 07-05-03, 08:46 PM   #3
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*didnt listen to Martinellis shit till now*

Um well Heres the lyrics casue thats aparentlly the cool textcee thing to do, so iLL just follow along with Marty-nelly

LYRICS

actuall audio

Good Lcuk

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Old 07-05-03, 11:07 PM   #4
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on da real though...good luck to everyone
 
Old 07-06-03, 02:35 AM   #5
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1. Gonzo/Martinelli/Crook Ed... Verse Nice Verse.. He Kept On Flow, I Liked His Lines , Wordplay And Multies.. I Liked The Ending With 'Burying The Hatchet, In Your Forehead'

2. DjX... I Liked Your Intro, With The Phone Call And Shit... But I Was Not Feeling All Of Your WordPlay And Multies..Wasnt Feeling How You Restarted The Beat For Each Guy.. You Are Second Best In This Tournament..

3. Nojeel ... He Called Black A 'Dumby'... and a Lying Jerk...
Was Not Feeling His Stuff At All...And He Complimented Blaks Crew.. And Said DjX Had A Uni-Brow... Come On... This Is Finals...

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Old 07-06-03, 03:37 AM   #6
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Vote..

1.] DJX - Nice Flow , Good Punches, Creative Material .. Nice Delivery, good Verse, your best out of this tourny at least.

2.] Gonzo - Nice Flow, Your punches would have been good, but their played so that lost points, delivery was good .. pretty good verse man.

3.] Nojeel - Flow was shaky .. punches didnt hit to hard at all, weak verse overall

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Old 07-06-03, 03:57 AM   #7
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WHAT! BLACK NO SHOWED!? AWWWWWWWWW thats fuckin wack! oh well

Anyway, did I call that shit or WUT!? Ok, now that I proved my point from the beef thread , lets get a real vote...

Gonzo: You didn't use an Eminem beat! Congrats to you! I'm glad that someone thought that you stayed on flow the whole time cus it sounded to me like you were strugglin a lil at some points. And I don't remember good multis either...? O well. Anyway, you had some good personals on blacklisted but djx has so much more on him you coulda said. your flow was so so. Your wordplay was ok... not really finals material tho. I'd expect to see better. Also, you punched in quite a bit. It was very noticable because sometimes you did it in odd places. You also had a couple played ideas in there... ex. the holiday inn line.

Ok, DJX...
By far the best quality. I didnt like how you seperated the verses. WAY TOO MUCH TALKIN... NOT NEARLY ENOUGH FLOWIN... 16 bars each? Thats ok but you had 7 minutes to spit. your wordplay was better than martinelli's. Without the talkin and all the other bullshit in the middle.... overall you had a decent verse. I was actually feelin it a lil bit. And thats sayin a lot cus i fuckin hate you sike. And I'm ignoring the fact that you and crook both had the No L line and the deck of cards line. Yall write your shit together? lol

aight, last but... well, maybe least (we'll see) Nojeel... NOT NOEL DUMMIES!...
You really need to work on ya delivery. You had some original ideas here but I couldn't really feel it. I wasnt feelin ya skeez. You and crook both have the same mediocre flow. Your originality seemed to fall off when you tried to hit hard with a punch... u called black a dummy and a liar... thats not creative at all. You shoulda combined your wordplay and your punches.... you probably would have taken this.

On that note...

MY VOTE
1. DJX - Overall punches, flow, and quality
2. Martinelli - Better punches than Nojeel
3. Nojeel - Nice try. Maybe next time
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Old 07-06-03, 11:32 AM   #8
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1. Djx...His Verse Flowed Amazing To Me..He Had A Great Delivery,Very NIce Material..16 Bars Each ? Didn't Really Matter How Much You Spit Cuz You Got Straight To Tha Point...Great Verse..

2. Gonzo...Nice Verse,Your Flow Was Iight,Ok Delivery,Ok Punches...Overall Good Verse

3. NoJeel... ? Flow Was Off...Delivery Wasn't Too Good Either..Originality Wise ? None At All...You Used Too Many Simple Disses

1st Place..DJX[Great Verse Man]
2nd Place..Crook Ed[You Came Nice,Not Nice Enuff To Take It Tho..Good Job Tho..MUCH PROPS]
3rd Place..NoJeel[Alright Verse,Work On Your Delivery Before The Next Tourney..MUCH RESPECT Tho..]
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1.)DjX-The approach was ehh, sorta to much talking but I think you outdid the talking when like every line was seriously dope to every opponent, your flow was way better, no slurness and quality was the best

2.)Gonzo-got ten times better since the last time I heard you, only problem is, That djX talked ot much and you talked to little, spitting liike 4mins worth of rhymes just doesnt keep me intresteted although you did have some pretty dope lines, along wiht one reconnizable. flow was aight, voice was good, prety dope verse

Nojeel-You we re sorta te underdog, I think at least,. some lines were eh, but you did have good content but you didnt present them in the right way, so your delivery needs a little work, know what i mean?, stay up kid, you can only get better.

My vote:
1.Djx
2.Gonzooooooooooooooo
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Old 07-06-03, 01:01 PM   #10
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1. Djx- nice shit. flow was on point throughout the whole audio. delivery was nice. lyrics were dope. lots of nice punches and personals for each opponent. nice job.

2. Martinelli- nice as well. flow was good but some points it seemed a little off. delivery was nice as well. lyrics were good but i think djx edged you a bit on them. overall this was a dope but djx edged you by a bit in each category. close but not quite.

3. nojeel - you need some work. i think you lucked out with your battlecard a little cuz you werent on their level. but you can improve. your flow was a bit choppy at times. delivery was pretty solid. lyrics were ehhh a little corny. good job but from your showin it seemed like you did get a lil bit lucky in gettin here.

4. blak listed- damn i cant believe you no showed. i'm sure it was for a good reason.

1.DJX
2.Martinelli
3.Nojeel
4. blak listed

nice job fellas. pz.
 
Old 07-06-03, 03:23 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally posted by Sureal
Votes:

1. Gonzo/Martinelli/Crook Ed... Verse Nice Verse.. He Kept On Flow, I Liked His Lines , Wordplay And Multies.. I Liked The Ending With 'Burying The Hatchet, In Your Forehead'

2. DjX... I Liked Your Intro, With The Phone Call And Shit... But I Was Not Feeling All Of Your WordPlay And Multies..Wasnt Feeling How You Restarted The Beat For Each Guy.. You Are Second Best In This Tournament..

3. Nojeel ... He Called Black A 'Dumby'... and a Lying Jerk...
Was Not Feeling His Stuff At All...And He Complimented Blaks Crew.. And Said DjX Had A Uni-Brow... Come On... This Is Finals...

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I AGREE YALL HAD MADDD GOOD SHYT....BUT MARTINELLI...HE WAS STRAIGHT FIRE....AND DJX UR SHYT WAS HOT TOO...BUT LESS TALK MORE RHYMEN...BUT OVERALL THIS WAS A ILL BATTLE...(THE OTHER KID DOESNT GET RECOGNITION...I DIDNT LIKE HIS)...GOOD BATTLE...1
 
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^^^^
I totally agree

1. Gonzo/Martinelli/Crook Ed .. I was feelin your verse you had good multies, stayed on flow , and punched pretty well and had some metaphors

2. DjX Good rhyming dude I was feelin your verse and i thought this shit woulda been a tie BUT I was not feelin that whole reverse the beat talk for a minute in between thing it just messed up the flow of your verse... But it was a good spit with excellent wordplay and punches...

3. Nojeel Ya you had an OK verse but like all of them said you complimented blacks crew and used fake puches liek Djx goota uni brow come on its great you got here but its finals you need sumthin stronger. Good effort from the guy who popped out of no where to get all the way to the finals
 
Old 07-07-03, 06:47 PM   #13
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Not sure if i can Vote in this bitch...
But i will speak my 2 cents, Well there aint much to say.


DJX Gets this hands down..Reasons? It just sounded like
he new what he was doing, I could carless about what some
of you said, Especially when you dont deliver it right..
X, Some lines were cool, But most were Whatever, Because of
your delivery.. Marty Mcfly shit was hot, BUt you didnt deliver the
shit right, Is it me, or does everyone on this site, Sound so alike
Your voices kill me, Well as far as the other Guys, Shit wasnt
total wack, but i just wasnt feeling either one of you's


There you have it folks, Whether you decide to keep the vote
its up to yall, Its just my opinion, And it was honest! Stay Up..1ne


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Old 07-07-03, 08:02 PM   #14
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yo, Martinelli gets my vote on this one......He put more effort in his verse, Not sure why DJX kept rippin his vocals they sound pretty similar too me.lol But yeah DJX did really come to hard his flow was on key but it wasnt exceptional.Nojeel came pretty weak for a final round lol MUMMY TWO!!!!!!!!Anyways Martinelli killed this and he should get the Funds......

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Old 07-08-03, 11:31 AM   #15
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a'ight.. I havn't voted on ne- of these yet, so I'll vote on the final round... here we go... .

1- Def Martinelli... his punches were fuckin' dope, mad wordplay and a good quality.. DJ-x's verse talked say'n he had a bad voice.. I think his voice was pretty dope.. over all hi verse(s) just sounded better and he had less filler in it..

2- DJ-X.. the only reason you didn't come first in my opinion is 'cause of all the talking between victems, that and some of your punches were pretty weak, your flow and delivery were pretty good, but over all Martinelli just took you..

3- Nojeel.. yo, that wasn't bad, but your punches were WEAK.. like some pretty elementary shit in there, flow was off in some places, I wasn't feelin' the beat either, sorry man but for the finals you should've come a little stronger..

4- Black Listed.... He no-showed, so I guess this is his spot.. .
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