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Old 11-22-04, 07:05 PM   #1
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Played Angel...Feat-InDeph and Two By Four

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the good in my soul..fading to the brink
of extinction..all my good will..traded..
into the link of deletion..we all bad..even
when the evil is tedius..we think that way
becuase of the media..its all in comparisin
compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you
narrow it..everyone knows..how to make a barrel
fit..commen knowledge..isn't with a bonding father
everyone's alone..in the world of modern..the
rage collects and stress..explodes soon..like a hourding
otter..sorry to slip a punchline in..that's not my style..
but you must comprehend..NWA..was the worst in
there day..no more..G-unit spraying guns..and getting
praise..it aint a phase..it will only grow worse..
its not like me..I gotten better since proverse
the armegeddon will come..short of schedule..
its too late to change now..death is inevitable..
do you remember when...racist comments brung
controversey..not nobody give a fuck..if a joke hurt me
I gotta say..this shit happened a bit early..god damn
even my little cousins..of 3 years old cursing..if its
not cool to be coolheaded..then guess the played angelz
got a new fetish..
-In Deph



Tricked thoughts people think there still good, but just Aint
I cant believe they don’t realize there bad, they make me Faint
Don’t they make you ponder how they got from good to Wack
The worst from what I seen, & to think there rhymes hit Intact
Make me laugh, why don’t they wake up outta there dream Sleep
Walk around and think how there rhymes became so down Deep
Some people go and steal rhymes from others, what fuckin Creeps
Go ahead ask me ill say there cowards stealing off different Peeps
Shits played out to many people do it, it gets real fuckin Confusing
It’s really the opposite of amusing, cuz people are afraid of Losing
There record might show there bad, but that don’t mean there Crap
They fall off rap, dream about being something else, get up off that Nap
Rapverse, to many homies lookin for them rv dollars, its all a Waste
Going from a vet to minor is the worst, damn that shits super Haste
Your overrated for one reason, you said your rhymes were Misplaced
I think your words weren’t written well to start with, you’re a Waste
Trying to fit in is hard when you always steal rhymes from Others
If they Came from yourself I would respect you in a way of Another
When your thinking about bitin a topical off someone, first use Meditation
First maybe you should go and find someone to help with your Elevation
-2 X 4

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Old 11-22-04, 07:31 PM   #2
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Old 11-22-04, 07:57 PM   #3
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Old 11-22-04, 09:16 PM   #4
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Old 11-22-04, 10:42 PM   #5
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come on..........uppin
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Old 11-23-04, 12:43 PM   #6
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upppppppppppppppin
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Old 11-23-04, 06:06 PM   #7
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Old 11-23-04, 08:12 PM   #8
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Old 11-23-04, 08:45 PM   #9
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nice!!
you both flowing good, good wordplay.structure's good. both stayed on tpic.
Indeph I was feeling your verse a bit more than 2by4.
but you both came dope.
oh yeh, you two are the last I thought we would see a collab from.
But the 2 style's went well together.
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Old 11-23-04, 08:52 PM   #10
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weerd...yea we had a diffrent thing goin on InDpeh put tiem on vocab more then me thats prob why you feel his more or just becuz hes naterually better then me topical wise..
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Old 11-23-04, 08:55 PM   #11
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Yea Like Fi-del Said Yall Had Wordplays Nice Flow And Good Struture Yall Good Nice

8/10

Put An Feedback In My Open Mic 2 By 4 And Indepth Put An Feedback Too

In My Om

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Old 11-23-04, 09:01 PM   #12
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iight homie...........uppin...good looks to
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Old 11-23-04, 11:33 PM   #13
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Old 11-23-04, 11:35 PM   #14
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nice rhyme schemes both ya'll. feelin this one. First one flows nice and has some nice word play and structure, and second verse follows it up hard. good looks to both ya'll. keep droppin (now get it in audio!!!)
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Old 11-23-04, 11:40 PM   #15
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lol weerd we both do audio so...iunno..
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