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Old 03-18-05, 02:00 PM   #1
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A Informal Intoduction...

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[B][SIZE=4]Action is believable and that is factual. Truth is seen never spoken. Everything is real. The time and what must be done.

And now we are here. Don't get caught "just" listening in the moments of time. Everything will move whether it moves or not. Does it move you or do you move it?

Emcee: Master of Creations/ Master Creating/ Master Creates/ Master Constructions/ Master Constructing/ Master Constructs...[/SIZE][/B]
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Old 03-18-05, 06:05 PM   #2
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ok.........................
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Old 03-18-05, 06:52 PM   #3
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ight welcome here stay active & battle often as u can
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Old 03-18-05, 09:32 PM   #4
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nice verses peeps but Wicked definately took this.

A_M_H: Ya verse flowed so good man, it was looking like a fuckin topical. That fat - mcdonalds thing was going at start, middle and end. Your punches were real good, some nice metas, nice vocab and decent structure. Easy to read and enjoyable too. -Long and full of quality.

Best bar: "ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls"
-Liking this for some reason loads.


Opponent: Nice verse bro, with some real good punches. Only reason you lost this is cos he had the volume of quality wen yours was in moderation. Ya opener was good and your close was sublime! Well done for making this red hot verse but oyu should have extended it.

best bar: "Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine"
-This is good, and your closer too.

No hate Poppy, keep doing ya thing
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Old 03-18-05, 09:51 PM   #5
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^what the fuck was that
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Old 03-19-05, 10:04 AM   #6
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A FORMAL intro...

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[B][FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=4]You not understanding this/ And I know why/ No more lies
We come with the truth/ Like John Wilkes Booth
Country in a Frenzy/ No value in a penny
Everything be changing/ All things rearranging
What they mean by a New World Order/ Got you on a Video recorder
Guns in every corner/ One shot you a goner
And you want to bone her/ After you born her
Sickening in the sight/ Freaks come out at night
Freeze in the dawn of the day/ Used condoms and dead bodies are the litter after the play
Six thousand years given/ A illusional life is what was living
Fast food order window you at/ Check your health/ You be fat
Not like Joe/ You stupid/ Like Larry, Curly and Moe
Can you talk without a curse/ My vocabulary so big/ It make your head burst
I be straight talking/ Straight walking/ And falsehood stalking
Now this my FORMAL introduction/ or induction/ or abuction
It do matter/ Like a full bladder
So take your place and your pick/ Chose wrong/ and eat a ...
All the while we be working/ Never jerking
We own this/ Your best dreams are a wish/ Fish
Out of water/ Around here/ No fear/ Or fright
Got evil and the traits of it in my sight
Now we get to the hook/ The title of a chapter in a book

[I]He makes all things new/ What you gonna do
As I move/ Like Rakim moved the Crowd
It will only be just a few and the proud/ Say it loud I am Black and Proud[/I]

More verses to come/ Right now I will just hit you with a dum-dum
Injuries are slight/ Didn't use all my might
I will let you know tho'/ These don't be playing fo sho/ Or Fe Sheezy
Everything is real/ You playing with steel/ So be easy
Or go hard/ If that is how you wanna come/ Cause after these we got full metal jackets/ And tennis rackets
We be hittin balls back/ And rushin nets/ Lobbing brains/ After lobotomy checks
Where my real people at/ I didn't have to ask that
They on quiet/ A quiet riot
Thats going on in the mental/ Its fudamental/ Check the first verse
Then check your pulse/ And make arrangements for a hearse/ Or just go curse
Or just go/ Talking about how long you been here/ You want sympathy and a tear/ Or tear away/ And go away/ Away/ A way long time coming
But we be coming/ Can you hear me/ Or you think we just funning
In a minute you will come to know/ We come for work/ We just arrived tho
Back to the hook/ The title of a chapter in a book

[I]He makes all things new/ What you gonna do
As I move/ Like Rakim moved the Crowd
It will only be just a few and the proud/ Say it loud I am Black and Proud[/SIZE][/FONT][/I][/B]
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