check in and spit

if i aint on when u post my verse will be posted by 10:15 tomorrow morning .................................................. ........................

Checkin in...

Didn't know you accepted this, thanks for doing so.

Kinda late in the day, I'll try and drop before I leave...

If not, you'll find it here when you drop yours at 10:15 tomorrow morning.

Good luck.

Peace afterwards

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

This kid claims ta merk and Severely blow minds...
But his Lyrics suck and his ass is sore from tha grind.
Test drivin dicks quick like playin speed metal guitar...
Enjoyin the stickshift, but this fag ain't buyin no car.
Look at his avatar, a picture says a thousand words...
He's the one givin not receivin, just livin the life of an herb.
Now he steps wrong, and makes a thread for this war...
Betta abandon hopes of winning like ECW abandoned hardcore.
Ya short on character with played lines cliched like Gary Coleman...
Missin somethin crucial, ya like Catcher in the Rye without Holden.
After this battle ya bones gonna be needin a surgeon's pins...
Like lightin metal joints, ya get no smoke and certainly no wins.
I guess ya answered ya own question with the way ya fall...
Ya a threat to no one least of all God, cuz Severe, ya nothin at all.

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

rules:
10-15 lines
no d/r crew hate votes
u spit first
holla bac
ill set up
jus check in

jus wanted to post the rules they were already posted in bitchslapped and we both agreed on em

nice verse ill post mine in a few minutes........................................... .......................................

I won't be here (out everyday at 5)...

So good luck and don't fuck up and get DQ'd for too many uppins...

Ya only get five...

I'll be here first thing in the morning ta see what happened.

Peace

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

ok so born to kill's spose to be a veteran//
then y's this newbie already considered to be better then him?//
u think ur nice cuz u got a lot of wins homie?//
then i'll jus have to rape u wit severe lyrics and i wont ask for no
help from kobe!//
yo ur jus one of the employees on this site, im one of ur bosses//
first u should check ur rec. cuz ur like ur cities football team cuz u
got less wins then losses//
its like im playin halo wit u cuz its jus a game and im on a killin
spree//
ur jus tryin to come out the closest man but u lost the key//
u say ur born to kill well im goin on a severe rampage thats
murderous//
hey yo how comes when u rhyme tight lyrics jus dont exist...like
february thirtieth//
im the one thats receivin in my avatar the way ur be recievin wuts in urs//if u say im nothin at all then u must be that times fours//
so u think ur beatin me in this battle, kid dont trip//
cuz u beatin me's like the houston texans winnin the nfl championship//

damn i hate that when i was keyin that it was only 15 lines my bad .................................................. ..........................................

VOTE - BORN TO KILL

REASON - He got this wit better flow, punches nd werdplay...his verse wuzn't all that great but it wuz certainly betta than severe's...sever: elevate a bit more...battle more ppl at ur level..

iight...one-sided..
PEACE

B2K spit jes at a right level needed enuff to win this

and to severe

veteran rhymes with better than
NOT veteran w/ better than~him~.....that didnt rhyme

first u should check ur rec. cuz ur like ur cities football team cuz u
got less wins then losses//

that punch would have prolly hit harder if u re-worded AND
it's too forced in the sense saying you tryna squeeze up everything in one lil bar which threw the flow off righ thurr

no matter how u wanna pronounce it, or how strange ur accent could be

murderous & thirtieth doesnt rhyme

mur~and thir~ does, but the whole words doesnt rhyme, feel me?

severe needs elevation

B2k, hit harder

Vote = B2k

Yea, it do..u musta been sayin it wrong..or some shit..



Again..it does...maybe not well but they do rhyme inna way

b2k merked this kid....better punches, flow, wordplay, vocab, structure...etc
vote=b2k
finish this shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80972

yeah, no question here........born merked this guy. Flow, punches, all of the above he got without a question. Severe, battle some people at ur level, no hate just a suggestion. Try to elevate as best you can........

vote = born.

please, SOMEONE help me finish this merkin................

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=80943

alrighty thats it. peace......................................

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