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12-23-06, 06:56 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Got the streets on lock By Killa
IP: 0082 6D90
Yo, this is my first full beat fully finished, just wanted some feed on it, cause i wanna elevate. I think my main problem is the drums so if i could get some help on that i would appreciate it, thanks y'all.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4807151 There the only one there 'Got the streets on lock' Appreciate all feed, 1 |
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12-23-06, 04:11 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: DF80 C765
Uppin............................................. .....need feed y'all
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12-23-06, 04:27 PM | #3 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: CBB0 F6F4
Dude, there's no real rythem in this.....ok, when that cookoo clock thing stops it's got a simple loop. Dude, the hook is horrible.....lol. The melody is OK, but you can't just let it loop through the whole song cause it gets annoying. You should use what you have for your verse spots as your hook and kill some of the melody for the actual verse spots.....I hope you know what I'm talking about, cause I think I might have lost myself there a bit....lol
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12-24-06, 05:08 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 8D1B 3B8E
Aight thanks for the feed
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12-25-06, 11:10 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 59B9 13EA
uppinnn for feed will RTF
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12-25-06, 06:03 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 48F2 8911
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn cmon y'all stop sleepin
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12-26-06, 08:05 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: F5F1 AD8A
fruity loops and adobe audition......why is there better programs?
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