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Old 02-05-04, 06:04 AM   #1
alias
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jaime V.s alias

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10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
good luck
 
Old 02-05-04, 06:06 AM   #2
jamie
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From: Chippenham
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You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2 Low, that funky little brother, yo
Comin back with a brand new cut
And you can new jack swing on my -
Cause I got this here so tight
A young playa doin damage to the mic (you sho' right)
I'm 13, but I ain't dumb
So bring it on if you little bustas want some
Cover your dome because it's on once again
And I'm a young playa that's known to win
 
Old 02-05-04, 06:15 AM   #3
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shit this kid spat in two minutes... i smell wre-write,
either that..... or he searched archives for a pre-bite,
like meals on wheels... he comes packaged an served,
he the type to go backwards on a learning curve,
another newb with wack name, an the skillz are equal,
he's like the second film, wacker than the sequal,
a quick key desroys the verse, which took him days,
let this be a lesson that cheating never pays,
this kid ain't ghost wrote, i leave him lookin white,
shit... i spit darker than you, when u droppin in the night.
 
Old 02-05-04, 06:37 AM   #4
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I can't officially vote, but here's what I thought.

Flow- Alias flowed like a river compared to his opponent. Jaime has some work to do,
his shit was hard as hell to read and boring.
Punches/Personals- Alias also took it in this category, actually all he had to do was
use a punch beacuse jamie didn't have any. Jamie should really
try to use punches and actually dissing his opponent. Nice
personals by Alias, and again Jaime needs to try and also use
personals.
Creativity- Alias hands down destroyed Jamie as far as creativity. Jaime is very
creative, if you consider that nobody else would ever write something
like this. He really really needs to dig deep and try and be more creative
Overall- All in all this was a very one sided battle. Alias flat out killed Jamie. He had
better flow, stronger punches ( not that jamie had punches), and was more
creative. Jaime's shit was terrible, he didn't even diss on Alias. His vocab and
creative were also seriously lacking. Thats why I have to give my vote to:

Alias
 
Old 02-05-04, 10:14 AM   #5
Freeman
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Quote:
Originally Posted by jamie
You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2 Low, that funky little brother, yo
Comin back with a brand new cut
And you can new jack swing on my -
Cause I got this here so tight
A young playa doin damage to the mic (you sho' right)
I'm 13, but I ain't dumb
So bring it on if you little bustas want some
Cover your dome because it's on once again
And I'm a young playa that's known to win


What the fuck^?

*sighs*

Why do wack people keep challenging decent people?

Alias takes this for obvious reasons...

He had punches... Flow... Vocab... Opener was good...
As he obviously pre-wrote that as there were no punches... let alone personals... For fuck sake man elevate...

Work on your...

Structure...
Flow...
Vocab...
Punches...
And general writing skills...
Learn how to spell...


A decent verse by Alias...

Jus out weighed the other dude...

v/ Alias

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112267

Pz...
 
Old 02-05-04, 01:16 PM   #6
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well first uppin
drop an honest vote an a link, an a proper broke dwon vote will be replyed to your battle
 
Old 02-05-04, 01:37 PM   #7
Daz
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You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2 Low, that funky little brother, yo
damn that was dope!
Comin back with a brand new cut
And you can new jack swing on my -
EVEN BETTER YOUR GONNA MURK HIM!
Cause I got this here so tight
A young playa doin damage to the mic (you sho' right)
uh oh ur killing him!
I'm 13, but I ain't dumb
So bring it on if you little bustas want some
i wish i had that dope line..
Cover your dome because it's on once again
And I'm a young playa that's known to win
woah!......great closer!

alias...im sorr but this kid killed you!...you must suck alias..you had nothing i liked...wack herb!....

v/Jaime

................................YEAH RIGHT!

umm no..why did you battle him? damn you alias picking on newbs...J work on everything...and do not battle until you do ..he murked you..any1 can see that..
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Old 02-05-04, 01:42 PM   #8
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I Cant Vote Either But Damn Jamie You Answer My Call........you Suck Kid
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Old 02-05-04, 01:43 PM   #9
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hey jaimes verse is bitten alias should automaticly get the win.. ill post the link and song this shit was bit from

link to bitten verse http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/scar...unkynig.scf.txt

You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2Low, that funky little niggaroe
Comin back with a brand new cut
And you can new jack swing on MY nuts
Cause I got the shit so tight
A young nigga doin damage to the mic (you sho' right)
I'm 13, but I ain't dumb
So bring it on if you muthafuckas want some
Cover your dome because it's on once again
And I'm a young nigga that's known to win






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Old 02-05-04, 01:46 PM   #10
.:K:.
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ite not a very good battle here jamie was up 1st,
your stuff was wak man, you came way to basic and it,
sounded like an open mic piece not a diss...you had no hard punches atall,
also your flow was non exsistent man soz but you gota elavate alot,
007 not the best of verses but i liked your attemp of wittyness here,
punches hit (not to hard) but they did hit here....
also you had a simple but affective structure wich made your verse flow well,
you had the newb personals but i wud inc;ude more here man,
overall not amazing but did the job man nice ............


plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112131 thx alot.......pz
 
Old 02-05-04, 01:47 PM   #11
menolin
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i fuckin wondered why his first line, wasn't even spelling out his name!!
ROFLMFAO out of all the people to bite from!!

thanks , erm
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Old 02-05-04, 01:49 PM   #12
.:K:.
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lmfa wak newb.i thaugth the 1st line was refering to 007.......lmfa...........remember to hit this man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112131 thx.............pz
 
Old 02-05-04, 01:51 PM   #13
Daz
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Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!why Did He Bite?....lmao
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Old 02-05-04, 01:54 PM   #14
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yeah i know and the verse he bit was from a fuckni 13 year old kid that aint even kit puberty yet.. yall should actually listen to the song that he bit from.. its off of scarfaces "the world is yours album" shit is pathetic.. im going to report this dude in ir
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Old 02-06-04, 04:58 PM   #15
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alias was justfar too good. go home jaimie. write some GOOD lyrics.
 
 


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