Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 06:45 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Raphael has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:50 PM.

I'll make U 'feel' my 'shit' even if I have to 'drop' right onto you...
I might be 'new' but you 'drop' elementary 'shit'....kinda like Dr.Seuss!...
Like Muhammed Ali I throw punches sure to leave you hoping for help from the 'crosses'...
KO you once,rematch you until you end up with 420 losses!!
Battlin me is like AIDS,noone wants it so U best stay real 'clean'...
Cause I'll throw 'punches' atcha...til 'Blood' appears all over Ur screen!!*...

Understand the personals and punches before voting.Everything's straight forward.
*-AIDS is transfered with blood.

4Blood2Hound0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:55 PM.

Ay son, I rap around you, just to spin you in a circle/
You ain't a rapper, you's a motha fuckin ninja turtle/
When I win I know your not gonna question the votes/
Your record is 0-0, so im supposed to be threatened by posts?/
Even then, its 30 some, tell me its more/
You be trippin when I spit, like you was wrapped in telephone cords/
Listen Raphael, ain't no stoppin me, possibly? OBVIOUSLY/
You wouldn't be on my level if you was standin over top of me/
I'll kill you, buy ya coffin and rent the hearse/
Gatorade bullets, won't rejuvenate, but'll quench ya thirst/
This is for men so its best you watch/
Before you fuck up, and I put 'tips' in ya, like you was a suggestion box/

Raphael was a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle
'Tips'-Hollow tips

aight....uppin...

up.

Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

dude my vote goes to hound cuz he took it man sick personals i really likes the turtle line nice wordplay and your punches were alll direct and hit all of them you def got this battle won man no doubt

raphael ok u had some nice punces but your personals didnt hit at all the were weak and work on some rhyme scheme wordplay better man and fix up some of the structure

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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

I'll make U 'feel' my 'shit' even if I have to 'drop' right onto you...
I might be 'new' but you 'drop' elementary 'shit'....kinda like Dr.Seuss!...
^^^^^^^^^ KINDA PLAYED BAR BUT GOOD PUNCH

Like Muhammed Ali I throw punches sure to leave you hoping for help from the 'crosses'...
KO you once,rematch you until you end up with 420 losses!!
^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH

Battlin me is like AIDS,noone wants it so U best stay real 'clean'...
Cause I'll throw 'punches' atcha...til 'Blood' appears all over Ur screen!!*...
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE CLOSA MAYNE GOOD VERSE WIT DEM PUNCHES FLOW & PERSONALS

Ay son, I rap around you, just to spin you in a circle/
You ain't a rapper, you's a motha fuckin ninja turtle/
When I win I know your not gonna question the votes/
Your record is 0-0, so im supposed to be threatened by posts?/
^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCHES AND OPENER AND NICE PERSONAL NICE MAYNE

Even then, its 30 some, tell me its more/
You be trippin when I spit, like you was wrapped in telephone cords/
Listen Raphael, ain't no stoppin me, possibly? OBVIOUSLY/
You wouldn't be on my level if you was standin over top of me/
I'll kill you, buy ya coffin and rent the hearse/
Gatorade bullets, won't rejuvenate, but'll quench ya thirst/
This is for men so its best you watch/
Before you fuck up, and I put 'tips' in ya, like you was a suggestion box/
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE CLOSA AND HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW (HARDER)

YO I THINK DA VOTE GOES TOOOOO 4BLOOD2HOUND CUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

YO RAPHAEL U HAD AN GOOD VERSE WIT DEM FLOW,PUNCHES AND PERSONALS, BUT DA PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN HARDER MAYNE BUT GOOD VERSE,,,,, KEEP AT IT THOUGHT WORK ON DEM PUNCHES AIGHT U'LL GET BETTA~!

YO VOTE GOES TO BLOODHOUND CUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOWZ

~PEACE~

Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

okay pretty fair battle
punches:bloodhound
structure:bloodhound
opener:bloodhound
personals:bloodhound
humor:raphael
overall:bloodhound

yo drop an honest vote here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148857

uppin 4 votes...

Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

ok my vote goes to 4blood.. becuase he had better flow, better inrto, everything was more tricky and flowing and the body of the rap just annihalated rapheal yet rapheal won in the ending. well done both of you

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