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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 01:50 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Logikal"Lyrickz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 01:21 PM.

Yo,ima SPIT dis SHIT on dis DICK/
Nigga u must be THICK,coz u aint ill u jus mentally SICK/
Ill leave ya smokin wid a hole in ya CHEST/Shoulda worn ya lyrical proof VEST/Nigga it aint a TEST/Leave ya in a casket in REST/
Im like a volcano ill ERUPT/Have u burnt UP like a spit-roasted DUCK/I dont give a FUCK/U jus SUCK/
Coz ill let fly lyrical ASSAULTS/Ive got many advantages u jus inhabit FAULTS/Put u in agony tenderin ya wounds wid spirits and SALTS/
U aint no EMCEE/Still suckin on yo' DADDY/Bitch ill demolish ya reputation and yo' CADDY/

ContagiousVenomz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 01:51 PM.

Your styles is over the “border”, mine is plain broader//1
And you couldn’t flow, if you rhymes where a ocean or water//2
And only time you close to 50 cents, is having to quarters//3
And ill leave your chest flat, like a 4 year old daughter//4

IGHT, LETS GET SERIOUS

My style isn’t contagious, so when I attack, its no gone help you out, as you may say rub off//5
So don’t try to play this, because you not a thug, it will shrub off, with a wash cloth//6

Ill chop out your brains, and leave you head spinning like you “delirious”, but watching the movie, is only time you “fast & furious”//7

But after a year being missing, the d-a becomes like George, “curios”, but only time you getting chocolate in your mouth, is a dick or a heresy “kiss”//8

But when your boy get shot, and though his head, he start to bleed threw, you gone be like come on “boo” I need “you”//9

And your not gang banging, only time you dealing with flags, is the kind you pledge to, you image is like Windex, cause ill send tech, and have you ~see-through //10

Super Mc, nothing about you is super, unless you way you got all the queers, calling//11
The Master OF cock, picking up his rhymes, in a ~pooper~scopper~, and playing soccer, is the only way you kicking, and balling//12

And only time you dealing with heat, is the oven and “toast”, and don’t think you don’t just get love on kali, there is none, on the east “coast”//13

You’re, sitting back sad in the party, I’m like Hugh Heffner the “host”, and your record is 0-480, like you number of “post”//14

And your rhymes are annoying, and printed in the wrong place, like Double Homicide, and PIMP J3//15

You not a artist, unless you dealing with paint, and Massaging Cock, is the only way you and MC//16

You said you can’t die when you already dead, then what you deceased body still rotting for, you can get thrown in the shed//19

My rhymes, are creping up on you like the Feds, and your life is like basketball games, people keep putting money on your head//18

And, ill leave a blood stain on your sheet, if you laying in bed, and only reason he isn’t peeing in his pants, cause he got to read, and not hear with I said//19

And you puppy chow, a little dog, stick with bow wow, didn’t they say you had to be thirteen or older to get in this site, and you’re here HOW//20

I know that punch hurt, but in advance, I’m gone to say oww, and only way you ain’t afraid of the dark, is morosely you turn into a owl//21

And only time you dealing with 22’s is the line you reading, now//22

BREAK IT DOWN FOR HIM…

Now lyrical destuive, combustive…(23)
Drive bys in automotives, throwing out explosives..(24)
Dynamite, and bombs, like the two cats on the 9/11 plane..(25)
And you rhymes are leftover, garbage despoil down the drain..(26)

Now come with your head, you end up with no fire, like a used LIGHTER(27)
And you can grip ya pen as hard as you want, you rhymes still won’t get no TIGHTER(28)

And leave you just dodged, like the new VIPER (29)
You can drink hypnotic, all night, and you rhymes, still won’t get no HYPER (30)

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

haahahh you won in all aspects logical lyriks suck bad... you need elelvating but you smoked this guy fasho
Punches: CV
personals: CV
Structre: Tied
flow: CV
OVerall :CV

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Death|Famine|

|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|

That's pretty fucking evil to me.....

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

weak battle
venom: way to long and a few lines didnt rhyme(number 12)
but it was way better that the otha dudes. work on your structure and you can be more effective. also work on some of your punches

logikal: dawg this is not elemntary school and so come with harder rhymes dog get some punches personals or something u need to work on that the next time aight

drop honest votes here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148857

fair enuff(wankers)^^^^^

MAn thats why rap verse SUCKS, yall don't know true talent..6 lines isnt a mc, thats a pargraph

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

Daaaamn Venomz, You Went All Out Kid..!

Nice Drop, Punches n Personals Were Rite On Point, Hella Nice Wordplay n Structre Was Better Than Ya Oppenents..

Logik, Ya Flow Was....I Dunno Mayn, Ya Lacked Punches, Ya Came With No Orignality Or No Vocab, Ya Need Elevation mayn, (No Hate)

Return The Favor In My Sig

P E A C E

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Wat Tha Hell U Writin A Book Mayn Haha Thas Long As Hell

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

logikal: weak verse i have to say
the flow got really choopy after each bar thats not good
punches were played and not at all well done...........
also didn't connect which is whack and i don't like.....

CV: wtfffff well the verse was ok......
but damn! it was like a story i just read 10 lines
and thought you won right there nuff said........
flow was choppy and punches were decent....

vote venomz

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^vote on that shit^

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Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

Contagious
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Logikal''Lyrickz
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

Ight thanks for the votes, come on only need a few more to wrap this up