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^"Gonna Be Only Me..."

dope lyrics - - - - Flow and delivery was worked on since that's the only problem people were say'n... leave a link

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Peeps ....... U Got Ya Own Style And Voice ... Which Is Good ... Flow Was On Point ... Lyrics Was Tight ... Feelin' the Hook ... Pretty Catchy ...

Overall ... Tight Shit Man ... Keep Up Da Good Work !! *Thumbs Up*

uppin'... dope lyrical piece... delivery improved too...leave a fuckin' link fuckers.. lol...

also jus' reply on delivery 'cause i come to the conclusion that all i need to improve, tell me how to improve that... 'cause most y'all hatin' on my delivery last track, so i tried to improve this track, holla wit how i did better or worse, an' what i need to do... u give indepth shit to me, i'll return the favor 100% what u said to me ... like line for line replies..

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This is fucked up man...I can't understand a fucken word...OH MY GOD!? What the fuck is that at the end of the bars...Man this is not dope lyrical..In fact I don't think you have ever dropped a nice lyrical line in your life ay...You know i'm hating...I'm just saying the fucken truth man...This is quite disgusting...Pz...

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ok... good for your opinion... if i had my new mic working an' u can hear it, and/or aren't just a bitch hater, it is lyrics an' multis you could never dream of thinkin' up... maybe not what your kangaroo raping ass consider normal to say, or not ya type of lyrics, but do better then complain... how bout a topical battle... fuck punches... and no pussy ass bitch topics... like ... "the eyes of beholder.." <---i had that for AE... no pussy shit like that, something we can both have fun with, ... judged by wordplay, multi's, staying on topic, flow, clarity, vocab, and delivery/emotion ..... we'll get a random person that we both agree on as not to be a dick ryder/ hater or bias in any way, to pick 5 judges... they are the only people allowed to vote... topics will be submitted, and voted on by other members in the audio section that aren't usual people who reply to either of us... and who ever loses get's banned FOR LIFE from rapbattles... lol.. i could care less really, not like i get paid to do this shit... so are you able to risk being pulled away from your beloved cyber home...... lmao... man if you say no,,, u'd be laughed off the page....

sorry for makin' u read so much, but i want it fare, since we both got dick ryders on this page... IE inspire... IE ... o wait, all my crew's already banned...

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Haha man i would NEVER waste my time in a topical battle with you...It would be the biggest waste of time in the world...I said its not hating...Use it as fucken constructive criticism...My flow is 1000 times better than yours so don't come at me with that bullshit you fucken idiot...hahaha...What happened to.."After our battle yo I'm off Rapbattles for good I got so much happening off line"...Get real you fucken tool...Your're nothing and never will be...Simple fact is man...I hate your music...as you said MY opinion...Contest it and say "I Think you're Wrong" but NEVER talk shit & make a fucken scene over somebody telling you the facts...

By the way mate there's no need for a BATTLE...Go and get 5 random heads to visit BOTH of our pages & see who they say has better Lyrical content..If the kids had fucken Kindergarten Knowledge you'd lose 5-0 just like you did last time...Get a life you fucking herb...you gotta have skillz before you can open your fucken mouth..you havn't even developed a tongue yet...Oh and also..Don't EVER hit me up on AIM again with your gay ass talk...eat my shit...Pz...

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LMAO@Me being a dickrider..

1. I've never voted on ANY of his shit.
2. He's a crew member and I often slander him in person.
3. Never ever do that gay "Blunt-Mc" on your tracks ever again..

You used to be half-decent back when I first joined, then you turned into an ass. Eat shit, you're wack.

ok hook is catchy but ou slightyl rush gonna be.. flow is pretty on point .. a few minor slips but nothing huge.. delivery.. is good and bad.. you emphasize the right parts.. but i dont know if i feel how you do it know what i mean... anyway.. nice rhyme scheme.. this is a solid joint man keep dropping

return the favor please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114325

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this is not bad, hook is pretty nice... delivery is decent...good job on this..



return the favor:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114407

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*listening*


the Intro is gay....i'm not really feelin the beat...i can't really understand u..
i'm not likin the hook...matter of fact *clicks off*

Blunt...i made a couple that was just shitty..like that Twisted Dimensia shit..
u have some good ones that i heard before...but i'm DEFINATELY not feelin
this...not feelin the beat...the flow....the lyrics which i can barely understand..
and i'm not feelin the hook...

i'm just keepin that shit real homey..but keep doin u

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k... 1... an' lol @ orikle... but whatever, i'm out..

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it seemed like most of your lines were a bit streched. like you threw so many fillers in every bar.. it just sounded like one long ass sentence. it was orginial i'll give you that... maybe think of cutting down your lines a little. and u should be dope.

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aight, not a bad drop really...pretty decent, but I noticed how you did stretch some of the wordz a lil bit 2 flow.....overall, thiz iz decent.....keep it up
PEACE OUT
ONE LIFE - ONE LUV

return the luv
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114758

alright........yeah i didnt feel this....vocals blah and beat...but anyways keep workin on it.....it might come eventually

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