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06-01-06, 12:51 AM | #1 | |||||||
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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I Dare You To Test Me
IP: 2037 EC9F
Most niccas talk shyt cuz they "vowels" is loose/
THEY KNO I PULL MORE "CHICKENS" WHEN IM RIDIN' IN DA "COOP"/ type of chick TO RATTLE YOU ON YA FROONT STOOP/ IM TALKIN BLOOD SPLATTERED ON DA WINDOW LIKE I WAS SHOOTING FOR THE TROOPS/ U THINK THIS SHYT IS HOT...PUT ME IN A BATTLE SEE THE DAMAGE THAT I DO/ I NAIL RANDOM NICCAS TO PINE LIKE DA CRUCIFIXTIAN/ AND CUT OFF YA MIC LIKE AN ORAL CIRCUMSITION/ I SUGGEST THE REST OF U emcee's FINE A NEW POSITION/ I'M SHOOTING FOR THE TOP SPOT AND LIKE CUM SHOTS I AIN'T MISSIN'.... EASYYYYYYYYYYY Feed 1 Feed 2
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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC.... Last edited by SpokenBluntly : 06-01-06 at 12:52 AM. Reason: mess up |
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06-04-06, 05:36 PM | #2 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4381 3163
choppy...hard to get into it...you shouldn't put quotes on your "wordplay" cuz it's annoying...if it's good wordplay, a writer or rapper will notice it without it being pointed out....keep workin on it...try to tell a story...a longer one...9 bars is kinda weak...pz
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06-06-06, 11:32 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: D177 752E
Closed read the rules
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