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08-28-05, 05:19 AM
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IP: 8B05 5CCD
Voted For: fraud
I understand your opening line, but the meaning is jumbled because you are thinking of getting too much in at the same time. Your concepts are ok on the whole, though, there is not much to this piece. Fraud you rep yourself so much that you forget that you need to make your rhyming flow consistantly. my vote goes to new editon This is because he has a little bit more understanding of the structuring of ryhmes. He did lose me a bit with his second line, but I remember Fraud mention something about battling was a piece of cake somewhere. I re read both as you do and saw that new edition also had better word play.
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08-28-05, 05:56 AM
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IP: 22E5 DE19
could u some1 change this vote^^^he said for voting me...i think he polled wrong..thx
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08-28-05, 06:15 AM
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IP: 8B05 5CCD
oops i voted wrong...could u some1 exchange this please
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08-28-05, 12:04 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 6258 5D0D
^^^ do u have some kinda beef with me???
cuz u the only one who voted agenist me and have been talking shit about me since my first tread whats good u wanna battle or something?? |
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08-28-05, 12:56 PM
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IP: 72AA 464B
Voted For: fraud
Fraud U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss.. You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss.. Lol ok 7/10 My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores' Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!! Good multi...8/10 U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS, Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS HAHA good closure 9/10 Good punches multis metaphors an wordplay. Elevate on personals i didnt see ne in there. Work on your strucutre a little flow was good.. New Edition Playa thinks his "fat" spitter, ou.............eat me like piece of cake, just eat,cauze "NEW" cake doesnt choke,it makes ur insides brake. Dont get it...0/10 And fuck that solo told me to take new teacher....i dont, Im not like u fraud, my only homework is get beat ya. Nooo 0/10 But you are with stupid........... so u cant type ur words, cauze bitch doesnt duck in "net" he looks competitors. dont rhyme 0/10 elevate on punches an personals. New wordplay would be nice your rhymes were played... v/ Fraud for harder hitting punches an personals.
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