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06-19-04, 01:39 PM | #1 | |||||
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2 Poetic Raps
IP: BCBC 6745
~ Lost In This Maze ~
I Think I'm 'Lost In This Maze' My Skins Torn 'Off Of This Face' I Was Just 'Tossed In This Case' When I 'Cough In This Way' It Leaves Me 'Robbed Of This Pay' And Sittin ' Soft And Amazed' I'm 'Sworn To Sakes' Of Tryin To Create What I"m 'Born To Make' I've 'Worn The Cape', But Does That Make The Problems 'Formulate'? While I 'Fought To Ordinate' Its My 'Thoughts That Store The Fate' Is My 'Emotions Truthless'? Or Are My Feelins 'Open Toothless'? While I'm 'Soaked In Ruthless' I Can Only 'Hope To Sooth This' Emotionless Like A 'Joke Nudist' With Problems Im 'Revoked To List' ~ Mindless Tyrants ~ God Has Stated, That I'm Left In This Life Obligated My Dawg Has Made It, While I Sit And Comiserate Will I Live A Day?, With This Sorow On My Dinner Plate Up In This Trade, That Has Me Grieving Misfortune Leaving Distortion, You Don't Wana Be Seein This Poor Kid My Reasons Abortion, I Leavin But, Keepin These War Sins Leavin Importance, While Believe And Seekin Antidotes My Bleedin Stance Is Closed, With Treason I Can't Oppose I'm Close To Ya Rain, Goin Through This Emotional Pain I'm Choked With A Strange, Unthoughtfull Manner Of Fashion A Sander Is Blasting, So I Can't Stand To Whats Happen While I'm Left With Nothin Less Than A Cancerous Action (You know how a niqqa do. Ya gots to drop some poetic shit.)
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07-16-04, 03:41 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
nice poem keep up the good job
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