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Old 04-28-04, 06:17 AM   #1
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Exclamation Karl Merks Dis - Must see

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ayo, who the fuck is this fag Karl merks,
i slapped this bitch so hard in the face his whole head hurts,
you quick to dis my shit bitch, you aint openminded,
i was askin for feedback but you just tryin to undermine it,
so i come back at you with this phat dis track,
im jus tryin to get better so i can battle you cats,
im so pissed right now ima push your wig back
your ryhme styles whack cos you musta been smoking SHIT, not crack,
your whack, and im destined to be PHAT,
THATS THAT BITCH

you aint nuthin but a hater, fuck you

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Old 04-28-04, 07:29 AM   #2
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well the flow was good sounded like audio , would have been better over the mic

i dont know why you got beef with karl though.
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Old 04-28-04, 07:56 AM   #3
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Kinda ill still!
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Old 04-28-04, 07:56 AM   #4
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prob is better on audio but im on college computers, i aint really got beef its jus that he dissed me straight up on me intro to the site, so i jus thought i'd show that i got potential...
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Old 04-28-04, 08:09 AM   #5
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^^^^^
nice but u need to post this shit in open mic....
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Old 04-28-04, 07:06 PM   #6
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ahahaha... I just saw this now. You sure showed me.
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Old 04-28-04, 07:59 PM   #7
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No offense, but for a battle this is a pretty weak drop. The flow wasn't that great, the punches were wack. You need actual PUNCHLINES and some intelligent humor for a solid battle verse.

But keep on writing and practicing..you'll elevate.

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Old 04-29-04, 03:14 AM   #8
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I guess you alot better then, PsyKOpath, huh???????......... so what you waiting for, homes - don't just say it, display it!!!!

No offence!!!
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Old 04-29-04, 07:38 PM   #9
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I guess you alot better then, PsyKOpath, huh???????......... so what you waiting for, homes - don't just say it, display it!!!!

No offence!!!


If I didn't know better I'd think you were speaking a different language.
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Old 04-29-04, 08:01 PM   #10
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ay Proliphik and BigNeks yall r 2 bitch made dick riding cock blowing pussy punk bitches. i want the both of yall to holla back at me for a battle handicap match and yall havent answered. yall r 2 bitches who r here to give each other positive feedback so u each dont feal bad, u fuckin bitches
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