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07-12-02, 12:26 PM
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~~Revenge Of Tha Nerds!~~ F/Nalej
IP: 4C49 64C6
N-Demik
Im An Inadequate Huminoid, In Any Other Terms Im A Geek.. Fighting Defeat Even When Our Physical Is Kind Of Weak.. Hiding In Sleep Tha Distress That Is Terminally Absorbed.. But This 9th Class School Was All Our Family Could Afford.. Delivering Tha Pie Equation To Tha 1000th Decimal Digit.. While Other Simpletons Fiddle, They Never Stop Tha Fidget.. An Anthropoid Calculator Oppressed By Lower Life Forms.. Help Is Like Pulling Out Tha Agonizing Lions Paw Thorn.. When Theres No Animals Within A Radius Of 4 Zero'd Numbers.. And Thats In Miles, Was Lied To By My Hero, My Own Mother.. These Books Are My Philosophical Doorway Towards Revenge.. Tha Allegorical Tools That Any Craftsman Uses To Mend.. Any Bend In Any Road To Success, These Nerds Have Backbones.. When Angry, Im Using My Number 2 Pencil To Stab Foes.. Tapped Up Glass Vision As My Eyesight Was Damn Terrible.. Never Thought Of As Sexual Or Getting Any Action Wit Seminals.. My Academic Career Was Booming, My Social Status Was Not.. They See Me And Say "That Knowledgeable Waiter Looks Lost".. But We Tha A+ Students Also Have Thoughts Of Rebellion.. I'll Fight My Own Confrontations Instead Of Always Telling On.. Nalej Ever SincE I was 3 The Doc NicknameD mE Geek, He MadE Me MeaN & Gave Me NeedS, Face Raved Acne, Wearin High Tops & Coideroy Flamed Jeans, 4 ThingS Are Sure DreamS, Wedgies & Fleming when I Crackup, Pant Cuffs Over Ankles Waitin For a Flash Flood, Crooked Gym & Off Weight Match up's, Stop Takin A Snack Lunch. .I'm too Fat Man, Then One Day..Decided to Strike Back, Slashin Every Tire On Each of the Bike Racks, Flipping Over all the Trash Cans, Shooting Rifles Through Windows Of Every Single Class, It's Madness Taking a Leap, Once waS a MatH Fiend, Be SorrY Yah EveR Made a StaB at Me! Now I'm Actin LiteraLLy, yaH Fiddle witH greeD & You'll End Up Dead With yah Family, Tie you Up & Slice youR TesticlES, Thinkin Of aLL The Fights you PulleD, Like The School? Light the Fool, Home Bound & Knock U OuT, so you Drown in thE PooL..Stool staB ya BacK Pull & Grab yaH aSS, TheN Shove a Pepsi Bottle, BusT a CaP- Hear me? Fuck a BlacK! I'm White & MusT RelaX. .I'm Bright & Love the Facts, Blunt with Grass & Hunt bY Class, I've Turned Fuckin MaD MaN, in Ozzy Sense & Rocking Less N Blocking anY MaiL CopS havE SenT, Raging WAr & DatinG WhoreS, Creatin Beef n Steak & Making Debates How i'm Hating MorE, Training Kids, tO RoB Drugstores & Takin This Kid, Rob, Slamming His Head Between a Door, Laughing Cause I FaLL, PuLL the Fire AlarM, theN Give DetentioN for RunninG in the Halls, Yah So Appauled? Well Take a Drink, it's Around uS all, BrowN, BlacK, WhiTe, oR jusT Bald If you've Got nothing to do witH it, Then It Ain't yah Fault..Be like Me, Sit Watch With Ink BlotS & Take a Drink of Alcohol.... |
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07-12-02, 03:07 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
Not a bad drop. Good to see some nerds representing. I thought that the first verse was better overall. Solid vocab and good flow. The second verse was alright, and had some nice wordplay.
Quote of Note: Pant Cuffs Over Ankles Waitin For a Flash Flood, I liked that one. The "slash every tire on the bike rack" line was used by Eminem in "Brain Damage" so you might want to change it 'cause people might accuse you of biting or something. Nice work. Peace |
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07-14-02, 04:51 PM
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IP: A024 FEC1
Thanks For Tha Feedback 4Eyez..
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07-15-02, 06:30 PM
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IP: 72F4 D1FE
Then One Day..Decided to Strike Back, Slashin Every Tire On Each of the Bike Racks,
BITTTEN WTF IS THAT SHIT AND 4EYES EVN TOLD YOU GOD YALL STUPID IF ANYONE ELSE DID THIS THEYED BE FUCKIN BANNED AND UY KNOW IT OUT |
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07-15-02, 06:34 PM
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IP: 15EF FBEA
I Never Used It, And Besides He Aint Even On This Site..
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07-16-02, 01:09 PM
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IP: E8E5 8C32
Quote:
So know it is because he is in T! and is a mod you think he is invincible,that makes you stupid!!!! Quote:
Word Now to the open mic,their was good use of vocab,even though this was something a little contraversial,it was different,and well worded for the most part.....except that one line,but it wasn't Rooks......... |
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07-17-02, 08:56 AM
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IP: D069 6C00
Aint gonna hate on the biting, cos I been accused for using 2 words from a Wu Tang joint... I liked this a lot, the style was a lot more understandable N-Demik, you pushed your imagery through, both verses combined well and were both on concept, the concept was well thought of, nice ideas... The rhythm was sturdy, multies and internal rhymes all the way through, a good rhyme scheme... Good used of vocab, it was sharp and balanced, understandable and was equipped with good amounts of wordplay... Feeling this, it was a good story line verse, keep dropping the gems...
Peez... |
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