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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

*No re-opening the battle if it gets closed after 21 days.*

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-24-05 at 03:49 PM

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Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-05 01:43 PM.

I'll stop when i won the round
I could lock you down with one bar like a dumb inmate...what now?
you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell
Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L
100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it
after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit
sure I'd spot you a bar, but rather use filler now than never
(copy and paste A solo verse) there you saved me the effort
Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad
but one's the lonliest number.....
....so even your one good bar is sad

Here you go pimp hurry up with that mic so we can collab

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Nick Fletcher has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 02:54 PM.

Your fucking wack with your forced wordplay and played punches.


Check it,
I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this..
..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black,
like a stone cold fucking racist!!
.
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Ha, just kiddin!!
Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through,
And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W
I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker
But you say endorsements kick ass………
…so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!!
I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it,
Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!!
It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick,
I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!!

Fuck You Bitch!!

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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Check it,
I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this..
..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black,
like a stone cold fucking racist!!

Nah, no punch, Your gnna diss him? and?


.
Ha, just kiddin!!
Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through,
And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W

Its ight, could be better

I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker
But you say endorsements kick ass………
…so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!!

Not feelin

I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it,
Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!!

Coo

It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick,
I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!!

Nah, Seen too many of these

Vs


you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell
Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L

Nice



100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it
after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit

Ight

the rest was just toooo weak to copy and paste.


V/Nick Fletcher.

If black was more consistent, he woulda got it easy

Voted For: Blackmage

Blackmage
I'll stop when i won the round
I could lock you down with one bar like a dumb inmate...what now?-good idea but your delivery could have been better
you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell
Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L-damn!!!!!
100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it
after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit
sure I'd spot you a bar, but rather use filler now than never
(copy and paste A solo verse) there you saved me the effort
Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad
but one's the lonliest number.....
....so even your one good bar is sad-OK

Here you go pimp hurry up with that mic so we can collab

Nick Fletcher
IP:
Your fucking wack with your forced wordplay and played punches.


Check it,
I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this..
..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black,
like a stone cold fucking racist!!-nice personal and flow
.
.
Ha, just kiddin!!
Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through,
And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W-nice bar
I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker
But you say endorsements kick ass………
…so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!!-no personal but original
I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it,
Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!!
It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick,
I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!!-you fell off at the end
Flow – Nick Fletcher’s structure was better – he had a smoother flow

Punches – Nick Fletcher, although most of the lines weren’t punches I was feeling Nick’s BMW line and Nike sneaker line a lot

Personals - Blackmage, did not had less than Nick Fletcher’s. But I believe in quality over quantity: the pun you created from NFL was very very witty. I think that was a very nice personal and therefore, it was a strong punchline as well.

Assonances- Both did not have multies except Blackmage’s first bar. However, it was delivered poorly. I suggest increasing the amount of multies in your rhymes if they are not redundant as they will enhance the flow of your verse.

Originality – Blackmage, with his personal (pun made out from the word NFL and his how number one is a lonely number and how he followed up on that)

Overall a decent battle. Winner: Blackmage because his personals were good enough to be hard punches and originality is the hardest thing to come up with. No hate though…Sorry Nick, in all honestly, it was a tough call

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that looks like the bmw line JTR hit me with in the KLL...it don't matter uppin for votes and good battle Nick, by the way...what's with all the sudden hatred, or are you mimesis all of a sudden...

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No intentional hate. Mimesis and I have a similar style that's all.

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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this..
..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black,
like a stone cold fucking racist!!
Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through,
And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W
I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it,
Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!!

vs

you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell
Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L
100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it
after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit

close one really, that () punch could have been worded better and been fuickin ill.

Nick got this one.

NO HATE
V./ Nick

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Me and Nick are in the same crew so I'll just check the polls and shit..

We really don't.. but whatever.

And lmao @ turning into the new Mimesis. Haha. I'm cool.

Word, I honestly don't think we have the same style either....

...I'm just going with what people say.

Plus, it ain't like its a bad thing being the new Mimesis.

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