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01-23-06, 02:04 PM | #1 | ||
Nt Your Average
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First Come...First Served Bitch!
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Yeah I Wrote This In Like 5 Mins www.soundclick.com/unf I Will Rtf Left Feed- Ike And Will Sun Yu http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220181 Trials And Tribulations Its Spul http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220184 Gimme That Ft.Chris Brown
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01-24-06, 12:41 AM | #2 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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ill leave feed on this tommorow
vote for two featured tracks for next week
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01-24-06, 01:12 PM | #3 | ||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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vocals kinda loud, better pronounciation throughout would help because I have to replay most of your bars to really get into it and know what you sayin. I like the rowdy talk shit vibe of it, delivery is solid, you definately feelin yourself- just work on the pronounciation and quality aspects and you got it... keep droppin
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01-24-06, 02:44 PM | #4 | ||
Nt Your Average
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IP:
Thanks..This Was A Quick Track To Finish A task I Was Set Lol
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01-25-06, 11:18 AM | #5 | ||
The Alternative MC
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IP:
beat is hard i like it...I could understand u pretty good but yeah u may wanna work on that...the part where u drop the beat u should drop it again right after that when u drop the punch i think it would sound ill...real short but hey...lyrically this really isnt anything amazing...dope like crack line is played...
return feed: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467
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