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01-28-04, 01:31 PM
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[Wk1]filed vs Walter Wall
IP: A9A7 727D
Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004 Topic: Choice Of Words
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01-28-04, 11:39 PM
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IP: 3236 2EB1
Hey...
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01-29-04, 11:36 AM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4427 B15C
aloha
checking in
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02-01-04, 09:04 AM
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Sharp Perfection.
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IP: 4427 B15C
Fumbling throu the mournful ways of my brain’s hidden paths
I discover that not all hope is eternally lost Finding more joyous memories to override the bad But yet what I’m desperately searching for is still covered by hates frost Throu entangled veins that pump my rich living blood I flow throu my unknowns to where the source of my feelings lie I can see my own pulsing beat that stays hidden by my skin Yet it does not sing the melody or the tune that makes me feel so high I can hear the music protruding from somewhere deep with in me And I know I understand what it’s desperately trying to get out But changing it into my human words is the problem that I’m having For long ago I discovered what its message and emotion was really all about Why is something so simple so hard to find within my own being When it should come instantly but with you it’s another story to be told I become lost in my own rhythm taken aside by my mixed thoughts For it feels like when I begin to speak my heart has tuned stone cold You use to be my comforter you use to calm down my jumpy nerves But lately when I with you the hate I see reaches out and strangles me For I can tell there’s no love for me left inside your burning corps But since I can not chose my words I can not set myself free
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R.I.P to my lost girl
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02-04-04, 12:59 AM
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IP: A044 7DA1
My choice of words are tight
but I forgot to write ....................... Give filed the win Keep me in the league though Ive been busy with school and whatnot Last edited by Walter Wall : 02-04-04 at 11:46 PM. |
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02-05-04, 12:05 AM
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Jee-You Knit?
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IP: AA13 BD60
This was an incredibly close battle. I mean.....Cutting the bullshit, since I need three votes.
Vote= Filed
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02-05-04, 01:42 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: ED3C 7BC1
Filed =Win
fix ya structure fi that is all.
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02-08-04, 05:11 PM
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IP: FDB7 F853
damn..Im going with Walter Wall..pretty good verse ..he had emotion and it shows..nice choice of words..I really liked the busy with school line..
my vote/walter wall... j/k'in..vote goes to Filed.. |
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02-09-04, 01:55 AM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: AD0C AD69
filed wins
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