ok im 0-0 but thats only because i dont battle onlince cause of dick riders.....but i know how to battle so i will try to help



this is a good line of your using it in a song, but not in a battle, when you battle you should never talk about your self, thats not what batling is about, it bugs me to see people that battle and talk about them self........but it was a ok line just doesnt belong in a battle.



doesnt really hit hard, hottie is a girl so i understand what you where tring to do. but what lines did you use to set that up? and what did you say to fallow it up? its hard to say if its a good line or not cause i cant see the lines before and after it......



that was OK but "right here i confused this black cat fuck" could have been more creative and worded better........the black cat fuck just sounds stupid

but you have potential to be a good battler.