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Old 04-27-05, 11:11 PM   #1
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Metaphorically Speaking

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“Metaphorically Speaking”… (society is shit)

I just want to say…:

“The declaration is erroneously spoke
P-Please, let me speak metaphorically
I’ll continue to live by my own philosophy
Society is a fucking joke, and it’s no joke…”


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I, to cry a thousand times, to bleed profusely from my eyes
To wish the world would not lead to it’s own demise
I, to stampede, like a thousand unbridled horses
I, to have dreams, for I too, dream of Porsches
I wish to abort abortion, I think it’s murder
I, to hear the whispers of a babies lost murmur
To weep with them, and I have felt the sorrow
Of those who know trepidation of not living tomorrow
My eyes are a waterfall, I cry the tears of my people
Black, white, brown, color is only for the feeble
Then come the weekend, I’m always weakened
Laboring double shift, I find it rather tiresome
They say I tire some, with my many philosophies
Well pardon me, for speaking metaphorically
I feel empathically, and I’ve known struggle
I, to feel your pain doubled when I’m on the double
I, to gaze at the night’s stars, to think metaphysically
After thousands of years, why haven’t we alleviated poverty?
I, to suppurate, to wail, for the whale is a beautiful animal
To cry once more, for numbers of species extinct is natural
I, to ponder god’s will, saying we all came from Adam
I, to ponder the science that says we all came from atom
I, to shed tears, to glower and question our government
T’was them that abounded the columbine shooters with weapons
And I, to wonder why, were sent to war, to slay our brothers
To wonder what has happened, to love from one human to another
They, to say that violence is not the answer, so why, why…
Why must we still be sent to countries to fight, and to die?
We are blood cells, we live life in vain, so incise mine
For I, would rather not cry till the end of time
I, to give these signs of hope, but yet no one listens
So I cry once more, for life isn’t worth living
I, to once again proliferate hate for our damned government
Why did they categorize us with races, countries and continents?
T’was them, that caused chauvinism, racism disgusts me
Were are all human, we are all the same species
So I cry, for if we all lived as one, and shared our money
Then there wouldn’t be any reason left for poverty
If we united, we’d create an unstoppable force “the power of one”
Yet I am the one, to cry, to mourn the death of god’s most beloved son
I, to weep for a savior, whose death was in spite, sorrow grasps me
And so, on Pegasus’s back I lead, angelic troops of high ranked Ptolemy
I, am whatever you want me to be, I am nothing... but a mere message
Now do you know why, I question why? For no man bothers to learn the lesson
So now do you know why, I constantly cry? For no man listens to me
I, to be the one, to be ignored, for I… am just speaking metaphorically

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Old 04-28-05, 02:53 AM   #2
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whattttt! Ima have to battle you.. actually I never battled poetry. How do you do that than it will be like a rap! yo yo yo that's gay? How in the hell do you battle poetry!
Well, I really like this one.. keep em coming!
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Old 04-28-05, 03:30 PM   #3
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Dope drop homie...

I, to ponder god’s will, saying we all came from Adam
I, to ponder the science that says we all came from atom

^ Good call..
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Old 04-28-05, 03:31 PM   #4
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wow, this is beautifully written and portrayed in your words, great vocabulary and concept, your emotion was strong in this piece, i enjoyed reading it and it is one of the best i've read today, since you wrote it after the cut off for featured poems,i will feature this next week, keep dropping..1
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Old 04-28-05, 07:10 PM   #5
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I was hoping you'd say it was one of the best you've ever read, instead of read today, or atleast, the best I read today, not one of the best, THE BEST, :'(
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Old 04-28-05, 07:59 PM   #6
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u n moi , need to battle go n join poetry league....
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Old 04-28-05, 08:18 PM   #7
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Man, I gotta battle you Poetry, Common, Sweft, C.A.L.I, and Valor, then i'd def be called the sites best poet , lol, and I got a couple topicals coming up to merk cats, one including nostradamus if he accepts, :O
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Old 04-29-05, 05:07 PM   #8
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^LOL ID MERK YOU SERIOUS AS WOULD ACUITY LOL YOUR GOOD BUT NOT THAT GOOD HOCAKE
ANYWAYS.....................I wish to abort abortion, I think it’s murder
I, to hear the whispers of a babies lost murmur
To weep with them, and I have felt the sorrow
Of those who know trepidation of not living tomorrow
THAT WAS FUCKING DOPE YOUR EMOTION AND VIVID DETAILS WERE GREAT ON THIS SOME LINES FELT THEY SHOULD HAVE BEEN WRITTEN BETTER HERE OVERALL THIS WAS A GOOD DROP STILL I LIKE HOW YOU DESCRIBED SO MANY ISSUES THAT TOUCH SO MANY PEOPLE BY DOING THAT ALOT OF PEOPLE WILL BE ABLE TO RELATE TO THIS HERE GOOD DROP HOMIE
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Old 04-29-05, 05:38 PM   #9
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Ya you might merk me... maybe, but you shouldn't be so confident either .... and this isn't my best piece by the way.. I've keyed all my poems so far
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Old 04-29-05, 05:46 PM   #10
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AHAHA!!! I know who you are now man... I think your Daz^^^^^^^^ Jack The Ripper, Jack Rackam... too similiar, both from canada, haha you an alias of daz, that why he's not in korv
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Old 05-11-05, 07:09 PM   #11
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............. this was supposed to be featured..... so sticky it damn it
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Old 05-11-05, 07:53 PM   #12
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We are blood cells, we live life in vain, so incise mine
For I, would rather not cry till the end of time
I, to give these signs of hope, but yet no one listens
So I cry once more, for life isn’t worth living

^^nice lines kid... good job..
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Old 05-16-05, 09:25 PM   #13
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yeye, i'll get back at you hotty and peep some of your shit
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Old 06-04-05, 10:17 PM   #14
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Bom chicka chicka bom bom... Bom chicka chicka bom bom
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Old 06-16-05, 03:06 AM   #15
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