ALRIGHT I CAN MAKE PUNCHLINES AND STUFF BUT I NEED HELP ND IT BOTHERS ME UM ASKIN PEOPLE TO HELP ME BUT I LIKE A CERTAIN STYLE BUT I CAN'T OBTAIN IT PLEASE HELP ME WITH THE LINES

weel why dont ya cum wit sumthin evryone would kindaa know like
i have yo ass more embarassed then u were on ya first date/
screamin out yo ass is prouder than when missy lost weight/

ugh, nice punch, had me rofl

I'm the oppisite. I cant give out real good punch lines, but I can flow on someone for a while and win. I need help on punch lines.
Holla back at me, and Ill help anyone as much as i can

JVibe

ok, you'll hear this a lot. But its what worked for me. And ...thats why I say it so much. Rap all the time, --- Never stop. Practice.

Trust me, I came into rap with
"I'll kill you, and ya mama too"
now......well damn
"I'll put a coma on my fist and give you some puncuation"

man look, research is the key here the only trhing u got is their past battles/chypher/statements, or their name, u gotta think man, u gotta eat sleep breathe and dream ryhmes u gotta rhyme all the tyme never stop droppin a dyme, u gotta train ur brain to ryhme with no try, see the whole fuckin second half of that paragrph rymed

o and wacht yuor speeling two, thast another thnng thatll get you

was this a joke?

excuse my "DUH", F_M_C

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Bars Of War - Champ
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The Eclipse...

try something easy like this


Don't be fooled I'll decrease the pressure to ya breath m8
And Leave you in question hand ya my avatars Neck lace

scarfacekapone, you're lame dawg
what're you trying to be?

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