thank u lay text 4 puttin me against dis clown.....check!

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^^he's scared.lol

Your mine now bitch

Yo, Marv and Newkid be on eachothers nuts hard huh?
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And lately, marvjay been on my nuts to... shit's making me sick
So this battle is weight off my shoulders... chest, waist, and dick
See that's complexity, marv aint got no wit, so place your bids
Cuz the only time he uses his head... Is when he's with newkid
I'm known to have kung-fu moves, so watch who your dissing
Quick to kick yo head just to have a leg up on the competition
Back to topics, I 'arkansaw' your body like american city wrists
Got so many dicks down ya throat we could call it an esofagus
And i'm a fucking weed head yo! So watch me smoke this 'jay'
Then crunch so many chips in his teath...
...you'd think he was eating lays!
I cast lightning, just to leave you under bad weather, ya feel?
And 'eyenose' your weak, so when your hit...
...they'll come together f'real
Proceed on to smack your lip, so you can 'see something swell'
Then beat this faggot into a 'cast' like it was a sorcerors spell!
Merk on, Merk off

look...

ima damage dis guy,cant cum "up wit a punch" putin "hands in da sky".
fam ya niggaz like da "GiNGER aLE" every mc datz from "CaNaDa'S-DRy".
give up u cant text-lame,when techz aim ima leave you wit a wet frame.
and put ya "GENiUS on a ps2" cuzz i aint really with da "head games".
you "scared of *TROOP*" fagget ur saught of like and "arabian bum".
i fucked his moms so like "STEVE NaSH" jack is my "canadian-SUN".
marv a smash dis nigga,its funny ppl really think dat ya raps is sicker.

^^^^^^^i guess thats why u changed ya name 2 "JaCK" the ripper.
ya rec. under head games is 4-7 lol ppl dont peep ya raps u borin dem.
jack's gay he stay "ON TOP OF C.a.L.i" like da "state of OREGON".
u lil annoyin fuck boy ya suck any asshole stepin da marv i solve em.
jack i'll put ya "site in a math book" then ask u do u have a "eye-problem".

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^^he's scared.lol

And lately, marvjay been on my nuts to... shit's making me sick
So this battle is weight off my shoulders... chest, waist, and dick
Good opener, 6/10
See that's complexity, marv aint got no wit, so place your bids
Cuz the only time he uses his head... Is when he's with newkid
Meh, word it better, 5/10
I'm known to have kung-fu moves, so watch who your dissing
Quick to kick yo head just to have a leg up on the competition
Nice concept, coulda worded better, 7/10
Back to topics, I 'arkansaw' your body like american city wrists
Got so many dicks down ya throat we could call it an esofagus
Great set-up, and dope punch, 8/10
And i'm a fucking weed head yo! So watch me smoke this 'jay'
Then crunch so many chips in his teath...
...you'd think he was eating lays!
Haha, nice concept again, 8/10
I cast lightning, just to leave you under bad weather, ya feel?
And 'eyenose' your weak, so when your hit...
...they'll come together f'real
This was fucking dope, 9/10
Proceed on to smack your lip, so you can 'see something swell'
Then beat this faggot into a 'cast' like it was a sorcerors spell!
Good shit for the closer, 8/10

Overall : 51/70 = 72.8%


ima damage dis guy,cant cum "up wit a punch" putin "hands in da sky".
fam ya niggaz like da "GiNGER aLE" every mc datz from "CaNaDa'S-DRy".
This was actually good, 8/10
give up u cant text-lame,when techz aim ima leave you wit a wet frame.
and put ya "GENiUS on a ps2" cuzz i aint really with da "head games".
This had been flipped around more then gymnasts, 4/10
you "scared of *TROOP*" fagget ur saught of like and "arabian bum".
i fucked his moms so like "STEVE NaSH" jack is my "canadian-SUN".
Momma lines = played, but wordplay was ok, 6/10
marv a smash dis nigga,its funny ppl really think dat ya raps is sicker.
^^^^^^^i guess thats why u changed ya name 2 "JaCK" the ripper.
Simple, but good, 7/10
ya rec. under head games is 4-7 lol ppl dont peep ya raps u borin dem.
jack's gay he stay "ON TOP OF C.a.L.i" like da "state of OREGON".
Fake personal, and played concept, 4/10
u lil annoyin fuck boy ya suck any asshole stepin da marv i solve em.
jack i'll put ya "site in a math book" then ask u do u have a "eye-problem".
Kinda played, but you flipped it good, 7/10

Overall : 34/60 = 56.6%

You both came hard, but MaRV came a little more played...also JTR had some dope wordplay...so...

Vote : Jack The Ripper

I see there's controversy over this battle, I'm voting. Too bad if someone don't like it have it deleted, Flow shoulda had me on the fucking Council like last time. But anyways, peep this shit.

Jack The Ripper aka Head Games
And lately, marvjay been on my nuts to... shit's making me sick
So this battle is weight off my shoulders... chest, waist, and dick
funny nice personal, aight opener.
See that's complexity, marv aint got no wit, so place your bids
Cuz the only time he uses his head... Is when he's with newkid
aight personal not hard hitting
I'm known to have kung-fu moves, so watch who your dissing
Quick to kick yo head just to have a leg up on the competition
self-glorify why is this here? dunno
Back to topics, I 'arkansaw' your body like american city wrists
Got so many dicks down ya throat we could call it an esofagus
he not from ARKANSAS SOOOOOO wtf? nice wordplay 2nd half
And i'm a fucking weed head yo! So watch me smoke this 'jay'
Then crunch so many chips in his teath...
...you'd think he was eating lays!
smoking J's been played to all hell.. 2nd have nice make up for it
I cast lightning, just to leave you under bad weather, ya feel?
And 'eyenose' your weak, so when your hit...
...they'll come together f'real
nice wordplay again.. lightening & hit almost went past me, real nice
Proceed on to smack your lip, so you can 'see something swell'
Then beat this faggot into a 'cast' like it was a sorcerors spell!
"see something swell" has no connection with "smackin a lip".No EYES in that, last half was wtf? no use really.

Nice personals, only one from what i can see was played... started off nice the lightening/hit line was the most creative props, and you had wordplay throughout which was very impressive, nice verse. Not bad all. So fuck all who said it sucked learn how to understand wordplay and catch his personals, fucking idiots. *Gets pissed at low critiques to his verse*

MaRVJay1009
ima damage dis guy,cant cum "up wit a punch" putin "hands in da sky".
fam ya niggaz like da "GiNGER aLE" every mc datz from "CaNaDa'S-DRy".
nice metaphors, aight personal to start off wit
give up u cant text-lame,when techz aim ima leave you wit a wet frame.
and put ya "GENiUS on a ps2" cuzz i aint really with da "head games".
first half filler for multis wtf?, second half made up nice connection.
you "scared of *TROOP*" fagget ur saught of like and "arabian bum".
i fucked his moms so like "STEVE NaSH" jack is my "canadian-SUN".
best personal line (first half) nice wordlay as well.. second have was extremely creative but sumwhat irrelevant
marv a smash dis nigga,its funny ppl really think dat ya raps is sicker.
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^^^^^^^i guess thats why u changed ya name 2 "JaCK" the ripper.
Nice personal, some peeps didn't catch it.. callin him a faggot, Jack-the-ripper.. not bad.. first half was blahhed out
ya rec. under head games is 4-7 lol ppl dont peep ya raps u borin dem.
jack's gay he stay "ON TOP OF C.a.L.i" like da "state of OREGON".
another good personal (1st half), i never heard any audio from last week for me this was str8.
u lil annoyin fuck boy ya suck any asshole stepin da marv i solve em.
jack i'll put ya "site in a math book" then ask u do u have a "eye-problem".
nice closer.. solve 'em/ math book... plus the eye-problem part = nice set-up. whoever said this is irrelevant i disagree but it didn't give a hard hitting effect. only downfall to that.

Not as many personals as Jack The Ripper, but you had better set-ups for them. Your downfall was them not being hard-hitting.. only wordplay that stood out nicely was the saught/arabian line.

This battle was not a slaughter. I don't care who disagrees but Jack The Ripper did take this, hate to have to break it down, but that's it right there. Now take y'all ridiculous beef in the beef thread. And i have no beef towards either one of you.

V/ Jack The Ripper

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^^ NO!, the 8/10 bar you gave him was a momma joke, rest were simple and played, come on man anyways, look, IMPORTANT:

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...311&postcount=6

^^^ Peep opener, MarvJay recycled in this battle word for word from his alias, I win, and I shoulda got a k.o. anyways, I gotta go to my cottage this week, and i'm only coming back monday Lay-Text, so don't dq me for missing the check in!!!

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