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Old 07-13-06, 03:39 AM   #1
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back to the grunge..wit no brushes except for the text..but yea so umm..i was bored as shit..check the time..but anyway..umm..i like it..but i think its too much text on this shit lmao..but i kinda like it like that..meh just leave some feed..

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Old 07-13-06, 04:50 AM   #2
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nice my dude...some nice grunge shit...real koo love the txt aswell..
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Old 07-13-06, 11:50 AM   #3
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Old 07-13-06, 05:37 PM   #4
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Old 07-13-06, 05:59 PM   #5
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its ok... way too busy though, you dont really have a focus point, like the eyes are confused where to look, you need that one focal point for a cover to work effectively. the font isnt too good, the V on verbal i at first thought was a B... the PA sticker looks beyond outta place aswell and breaks the flow of the tracklisting along the bottom, and the red text also looks out of place in the last track for that "special appearance"... also.. on the tracklist you go in order with the color switch but on the brown texts, the numbers are still white, where as on the white text, its still white... it makes it all look uneven. also im not a fan of alternating colors.

either do it all one color, or do the numbers one color and the artist/song names another.
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too clutterd
couldnt read the text at first glance
im feelin the background tho
the main font...the middle one too dark...should brighten it up a bit
in the tracklist the brown text is too dark also...
overall its a pretty coo cover...kinda dark in some areas
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Old 07-13-06, 10:48 PM   #7
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^^yea i changed that last night..the track color..but i just didnt repost the newer one..
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I like it, but you need some minor changes. First, I would raise the Verbal Assasins text to go directly under the DJ Ahmad text.....almost touching. Then I would probably still smush all the text at the top together a little more just to make more room for the background to shine through. Then you shouldn't put the whole track list on the front cover.....just put some artists it features or some hit songs on it.....shit like that, cause there is way too much text at the bottom.....
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yea i kno..but we only gonna have the thin cd covers..wit only one spot for a front..so i said meh and put it on there..bmore cats aint seen nothin this good anyway..lol
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do a back the same size as the front and just put it in behind the front so they can see the tracklist when they open the cover.
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nah...im savin money by doin that..ima get these printed out at a professional store..and it cost like..$200 to print out 500 of these shits..-_-
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^ jus go to the library...15 Cents for a single sheet
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but the printers are shitty..=\
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u getting the printing and cd pressing type shit??? or just cover printed on a printer????
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text is wayyyyy too cluttered, its impossible to focus on any one part of it, when you look at an album cover you should see the name of it without even trying to read it, and you have to suffer to read anything on this cover...
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