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Topic: Fame and Fortune

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check check check check check hahaha this will be dope

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check mic 1,2 check check ..........yo Valor make sure we get a dope topic...G'luck man

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Like ink in clear water i can see the disease of dark clouds
As hatred builds all around......and my enemys.....
who were friends of me begin to unshroud
My possesions build like a kingly estate my gaments of silken cloth
Waxen candles burn the shadows on the walls reflecting my thoughts
I stand alone a rich man who can not buy campanionship
Who can trust none so is left as one in abondonment
Personal banishment.......
those i dont know love me more then themselves
But its not love of me......
but for who i am.......and love is not returned by my cold wealth
My name is known on the tongues of strangers
But i live in constant danger so i stand in dark rooms with my anger
Who loves me and who loves who i am?
Who loves the man i am and who just loves THE MAN that i am?
Diamonds and pearls reflect the loss of light in my irises
As i sucumb to sickness and viruses of mental silences
Soon i see things as they are but not as they are
And i trap myself in a mental prison hanging from bars
THEY DONT LOVE ME THEY WANT WHAT I HAVE AND THEY CANT HAVE IT!!
So i stay inside as my skin pales my eyes becoming rabid
I curse my fans who tell me to stop cuz im gifted
But the drugs help to calm me............... im not addicted!
They are my medicine to help me cure this inflicted sickness!
Theres nothing left to do im dieing inside so i pray
But who can hear me if im GOD?
Thats what i belive and most of my fans say

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i win on no show its 5 am monday morning i win

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Dear Valor and CALI (lol),
My post is l8 because:
internet went down yday and so i wasnt even on Rv after 12 because of this, and that aint bullshit cos im always on until about 2.00 when i watch pimp my ride....if u wanna jus DQ me u can, but i put time into this and i thinkit'd b harsh,and his drop is dope and b interestin 2 c who u think won, as for sayin is hould have dropped earlier, you can check all my poetry i always sit and do it and submit it on the sunday....im submitting this from school and you can check the IP address, hopefully when i get home ill have my connection back cos i told mum to sort it out.

Peace

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no dq and i will explain why ..........i thought my net was going off on the fifth as alot of people know and i still dont know whats going on it was suppose to be dqed anyday now so once i accepted i keystyled my verse to make sure i didnt get a no show just in case if my comp had went off i wouldve went to the libary and dropped from there but i wouldnt have no showed you waited to the last minute reason why i dont know your not as busy as me i work and do a track everyday audio and still text battle plus drop this your a cool dude but no you have no excuse for this so i will say next time you shouldnt wait till the last minute valor dq him and give me george next round that is all.

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not to freepost. but, first off.

use a fuckin' period once in a while.

second, just because he merked you, don't be a bitch and have him dq'ed.

let people vote. if you believe you won, then you have nothing to worry about.

yo homie...im not as busy as u? lol ma life dont revolve around RV and the poetry league, im more worried about getting into university,work, my family situations n shit, helpin ma grandma out...jus cos i aint tryin to get into rap game and droppin audio 24/7 dnt mean i aint got a busy life..so check that........if you want me dq'ed fine b like dat but i thought ud understand man and wud be betta than that....ur tha 1 who was hypin dis battle and now u dont want it voted on??? .........but fine i aint bothered......do as u will..... Peace

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yes i want the dq i think you shouldve dropped sooner its your own fault for waiting till the last minute i do audio everyday battle text go to work chill with wifey help my grandmother and im moving yet i find time to not only drop but have plenty of time left so i find your excuse invalid

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Welll I Was Gonna vote But Now That i Look Over The Post I see that its bout To be Dq'ed So

Peace