Here are my first two attempts at making beats. Don't rip on me too much. All feedback is welcome.

First Beat - melodies made by me...no loops used:
hifi: http://rapbattle.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/63960
lofi: http://rapbattle.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/63960

Second Beat - using 8-9 different loops:
hifi: http://rapbattle.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/63961
lofi: http://rapbattle.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/63961

First beat - RnB / NOT to bad man, on the real, i was expecting some JUNK...but this isnt half bad on the real...u got the drums droppin out at nice points......

Second beat - Im likin this one too...kinda on that Hi-Tek / Talib feel....Whatever that CRASHH soundis though needs to go...the rest is pretty sweet...not to bad...seems liek the loops were off at one point....

.pz.

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im peepin...actual fact...i think the first one is better than some peoples 20th beat...yo...you could be makin some really tyte shit if you stick with this beatmaking....def...i could here that you have some abilty to understand the musicnotes and drum patterns and all that shit.....def give it a shot....pz

You suck. Those beats are complete garbage. These people are only sucking up to you because you are an admin. You couldnt pay me to listen to another one of your shitty ass beats. Damned herb. lol, you know I'm playing. They were good.. you shared the first one with me awhile ago.. just heard the second for the first time. Keep it up.. maybe someday you'll be good.

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I heard these a while back...
very nice for starting beats...
better than i could ever do...
lol..good job. glad to see you...
you are amazing at everything
that you do. and that is true
these beats blew my mind
you should charge for those
take them off here so that no
one steals them . those are
worth AT LEAST 10000 dollars
each. ok. you are a prodigy
my friend....


(could i be a supermod?)

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these are nice beats. I just got Fruity loops and i cant even figure out how to make beats to rap to..... but urs were good

better than i expected.... a lot better them most peoples beats when theyve been producin for a few months..

The End is pathetic...

Moving on, the first beat is pretty nice, melodies are very nice,
there wasnt really a downfall to this one.

Second beat, wow, this was nice too.. like everyone else said
i didnt expect much, but both these were very nice...

Cise

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^^ Why dont you mind your own shit? Me and Mike have been boys for 15 years and I am just screwing around with him. Shut the fuck up and just walk away asshole.

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wow.
watches sise *walk away*
see you later man.

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lol

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word, thats cool, first beats are always experimental

first one...i'd prolly use a different kick, the bongos when they came in were pretty good soundin...decent work with the strings...its not bad

second one...i like the melody over that loop that sounds pretty damn cool lol...that lil snare crash i'm not feelin too much in that drum loop...the mixing of the sample over the loop was a lil off at a certain spot but nonetheless good for starters

gotta agree with everyone else, you got the potential to do some damage...

keep em bangin

The first beats I made sounded like a crack head monkey drank a 5th of hennesey then ran around Sam Ash music superstore with a hammer and a baseball bat . . .

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LMMFAO^^^^ i havent listened to the beets yet, im going to right now, they r great, in advance

the first one is good for an R&B song.

i dont like the 2nd one it sounds like an intro to a childrens cartoon in my mind im picturing a little white dog skipping with a basket of apples.

im not talking trash thats just my honest opinion. i only talk trash to stupid people posting stupid pictures, if it has to do with music im serious. so dont take this post in the wrong way, cause everyone seems to think everything i post is dissing on them.

BTW check out my 2nd beat LOL down there below my post under the president.