Rules:
spit due 20 min. after check in.
no d/r
no c/v
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3-0 is ko
Topic: escape da police
No SHow is a loss....lolz...for somereason that always happens to me!!!

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I wasn't talkin to you in that thread, but its funny how we both were postin like that and signals got crossed.... I dont duck shit though so my verse will be up in 20 son... ez

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aight...lets change this to a dis battle aight dawg...not a topical battle...ur still gonna loose either way..hahaha

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oh aight...so we doin a regular battle now..hahaha..aight..so topical it is...here's my check in

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Just shot this poser named Atmosphere and he hurt in the block/
But now I got bigger worries cuz his boy alerted the cops//
I hear sirens comin quickly now down around the side-street/
Put the burner back in the coat-- cuz I keep my-heat/
Im Grimey- I know these streets-- can't noone find-me//
First move I made was quickly hop in the whip- hit ignition/
Sirens comin closer so I "hit" the long pedal lika "pidgeon"//
rear tires squealin- Quickly capped the trampy witness/
Did a 360 in the street Dip on the On-Ramp wit a quickness/
Did some James Bond shit and cut between a benz and a mazda/
And made a 18 Wheeler crush a miata and kill the driva//
red-lining in my charger quickly downshift and make left turn/
All this before the cops got to where I shot and made his chest-burn//
Drivin slower now, The siren sounds have faded--
Thats how to run from cops- And actually make-it//

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nah the thread says topical keep it topical.... My verse was up in 20 mins... You got about 5 left before YOU dq.

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I've now jst escaped a penetentary prison//
had to kill one cop and da cell mate tat was wit him//
with Seventhirds behind me, I took a brick threw it and tripped him//
But then he stood up and kept runnin hopin he'll make life and start livin//
I hopped fences, jumped ropes and jacked a mercadece benz//
as a sniper looked at me through his bright sighting lense//
While drivin seen a person, quickley turned right hopin i didn't hit her//
But fuck, drove off da bridge and realized I drove into da river//
Da sniper was still followin me, so hid and took his gun//
Shot one guy, one faget, and tried ta shoot another cop all for fun//
while sniping the cop got shot in the leg by a jail guard//
got up and started to run but realized i was back in the jail yard//

good luck

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easier to read if it's like this

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plz uppin this shyt ppl plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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we need votes here people we will return the favor

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seventhird did come wit the imaginary mind......He
had the structure and was more imagerniary.....similies
was the best past though

atmo-you did good too......Work on
gettin imaginary more.....But thats my opinion
atmosphere migh win this......nice battle

Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

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ight thats one.... keep em comin people well return the fav.

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seventhird - okay decent drop....pretty short verse for a topical.....but u statyed on topical....not a lot of description to see it happenin....but go the story well....jus elevate on the wordplay.....nice drop....give it a....
6.7/10

atmosphere - another decent drop....liked the ending...pretty funny....but not as beleivable as sevenminds...u stayed on topic....better flow....better wordplay....even though his was better to believe by a tiny bit.....ur flow and wordplay killed his....thats why you got this....
6.9/10

Vote - Atmosphere....this wasd a very evenly matched contest....keep elevatin.....

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Thanx boy...uppin da votes plz!!!!!

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