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Old 01-11-06, 08:50 AM   #1
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dissing this kid from where i grew up he made a due date to battle then never droped so im dropin this as my first diss towards tha lil bitch

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Old 01-11-06, 09:49 AM   #2
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not a bad track...liked the 1st beat...punches were ok...personals i ain't really get due to i don't know mans u dissin but they were used rightly...

i like ya flow man delivery is ok could work on it further...

2nd beat was nice also flows nice work on breath control could point out 1 area specially where ya flow actually fell off due to loss of breath...

this is the first i hearda ya...quality is nice...ya not bad...liked this track

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Old 01-11-06, 02:24 PM   #3
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^I agree ..

Ya presence is pretty decent..
Nice nice flow..
Like he said, work on ya breath control...
Cool punches.. Got at him hard...

Nice verse..
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Old 01-11-06, 08:26 PM   #4
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werd thanx yeah i smoke madd weed and cigarettes so i do have to work on breathe control than yall bumpin this for more feed
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Old 01-11-06, 08:35 PM   #5
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ight im typin while listening...good beat chioce...ur quality is ight aint horrible...the disses are ight some dope ans some are just ight...its got a decent flow....lmfao @ shave ur face...the second beat is ight...ur flow is ight sounds a lil rushed...but lmao at the disses the disses were dope...yo not bad 8.5/10 keep it coming dawg
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Old 01-11-06, 09:22 PM   #6
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Old 01-11-06, 11:20 PM   #7
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leave feed people com on....................................fukkin sleeperz
i leave so much feed no one returnz tha favour for fukk sakes
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vocals...sound hallway-ish


and echoey...


flow is cool...not bad there


pretty good hits


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Old 01-12-06, 12:47 AM   #9
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werd thanx uppin fo more
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Old 01-12-06, 03:27 PM   #11
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Old 01-12-06, 07:20 PM   #12
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Old 01-13-06, 01:10 AM   #13
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Old 01-13-06, 01:19 AM   #14
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Owned.
and Pwned
Nice beat lmao
Tight lyrics
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Old 01-13-06, 02:37 AM   #15
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Listening...

Beat is decent...

Flow is pretty good, but choppy and shaky at times. Delivery is good...quality ain't bad...(using my tutorial..?), but overall a good track. Keep it up you elevating steady.

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