A History Project i did, just let me kno what yall think i dont hand it in until thursday the 20th so i can edit it before then....

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Theres only bout 2 monutes of me rapping the rest is FDR's final speech as the allied forces crossed the english channel....its all chopped up between my verses and his speech.....youll see

GZU Tek Productions on the beat i mixed everything from the church music behind fdr and the crossfades which arent that great


Featured History lesson of the week- this track could use some finishing, but its a very good peice that desserves some recognition 1/17-24/05

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lol...this nigga gotta be different and put his shit on "D" music...lol...j/k dawg


ummm...the intro should have been sped up...literally...I mean on Cool edit, speed the selection up but maintain the pitch...good insert though


Ur voice doesn't stand out from other "white" rappers on this board...and I'm not being racist. I'm saying you sound like @ least 4 other guys here. This wouldn't be a problem if your flow was dynamic enough to carry you, but it isn't. And, your delivery is lackluster. I think you have much potential if you A.) Work on flow, B.) Improve your delivery C.) include some dope metas in ur raps



not bad tho...the creativity in this track is evident...


6.5/10



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lol out of ten i hope thats not a 101

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lol...interestin fraction...itz outta 10 dawg

listenin...
the beat is real hott man
flow is definatly nice
delivery is also a nice mellew type to this...
lyrics also tight
overall dope track

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intro is drama- nice build into the instrumental.... Im really feelin the vibe of it, its a little history lesson-- your vocals are real low when you fade in in the second verse, I dunno if you might wanna change that a little... word pronounciation is o.k- but it could use a little more crispness so its easier to understand your words... but lyrically and idea wise its dope... good shit-- featured for the next week.

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thanks seven third

uppin...

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This track is dope man, i liked the intro and the beat, very informative as well, you learn some shit listening to this..lol,your flow is good, but you could be louder and speak out, some more emotion maybe,but this wasnt bad at all,i enjoyed it, good idea for a history project, i bet you recieved a great grade for this one..lol, anyway,nice job, stay up.1

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