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Old 08-05-04, 12:33 AM   #1
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!!heres a demo!! need signing!!

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heres some demo, for lyrics,

you need to check your rap skillz, rethink wut they're all about
you rap like fucking 50 cent with an 80% discount
re-do ur style, ur lyrics, and all your shit as gear
i dont care how sad u feel about this, bitch wipe ur tear
forever we rockin' the blue, its wuts true
come with a gatt with 9 bullets to fight ur 9-man crew
cuz my bullet is the dart, and the bullzeye is ur heart
i knew u were a pussy right from the very start
wait until u see my lyrics complete
i'll have u mistake me for Immortal Technique. 1

Copyright<> X-pert-90 <> come reply.
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Old 08-05-04, 12:35 AM   #2
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thats tight u wanna join Franchise
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Old 08-05-04, 12:46 AM   #3
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The first bar was the dopest. Not a BAD drop. Just not as good as what I belive you are capable of. Flow was consistent, but vocab, multis and metas you should work on.
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Old 08-05-04, 12:46 AM   #4
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ur not gonna get signed to any1 for droppin some text bro.. do audios..
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Old 08-05-04, 12:55 AM   #5
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^--- Sin Said It Best....
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Old 08-05-04, 01:19 AM   #6
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^^^^^^^^^^Dats truth text aint gon get u shit......Trust
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Old 08-05-04, 01:24 AM   #7
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damn another CRAB
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Old 08-05-04, 01:56 AM   #8
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Your lyrics aren't bad, but they aren't really good either. You have some ok lines but a lot of it is played out and too simple. But yeah...even if your lyrics were cold as fuck I doubt you'd still get signed by postin some lyrics...

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Old 08-05-04, 01:57 AM   #9
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nice, my new site, located in the sig, is look for talent like you, and to become a mod at my board all you need is 25 posts.
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Old 08-05-04, 02:35 AM   #10
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^^link dont work.. and im pretty sure u get banned for postin links to other boards..

so id take that out if i was u...
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Old 08-05-04, 11:17 AM   #11
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^- prolly not it takes forever... mods are lazy..
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