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Old 10-01-08, 11:51 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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yo, can anyone help?

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word just got a job working at a recording studio @ school....
10 dollars an hour to sit around and do nothing basically which means i spend my time using their 3k nueman mic recording...just getting used to pro tools too....

but this is the first version of a new song im working on, im looking for suggestions where i should take this...what you like/dont like...so when i go and do this again sunday i can tweak all this shit n everything....soo any thing yall can give me to help would be awesome....

songs called turn it up, its the first take -
http://www.zshare.net/audio/19790191d87b1d6a/
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Old 10-02-08, 06:57 PM   #2
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damn no one on here can help a brother out?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 10-02-08, 10:24 PM   #3
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Give me a minute i'll take a look at this tonight.
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Old 10-02-08, 10:44 PM   #4
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song wont play...it like...lags n skips...

but...you get PAID to set around and record ..on bad ass equiptment??????????


what in the fuck man...
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Old 10-02-08, 10:47 PM   #5
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This beat is incredible yo. Your flo was good. My rhymes outshine your necklace sounded a little weird but i think that's just your flo.

Second verse the flo seemed off in multiple places but once again i'm not sure cause your style is really weird. Seemed like you needed a little more at the end of the second verse then and that's why i'm sayin...maybe a delay on "why im sayin" so it echoes or something like "and that's why i'm sayin to these punks...if you hear me, etc".

The chorus is awesome but the "if you hear me turn it up sounds TOO plain against the effect of the rest of the chorus. I have no advice for this i really just wanna see what you do cause i know it's gonna be hot.

Also this song is awesome. If you put somebody else on it, it better be me I been waiting to feature on a song with my new equipment.


P.S. Send me a link to your cd so i can "cop that disc" yo.
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