Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

black gets this however opt1k had a nice compelling story that got to me...it just shooda been worded and written better

opt1k-great stroy, the fact that its true helps you out alot, however the way you wrote it wasnt very decriptive and didnt give me a great image, wordchoice coodve been better

black-good vocab, nice wordchoice, had me feelign like i wzs inside your mind and reading your thoguhts, nice drop good imagery

overall-i feel like black stayed on topic better, he also had good imagery and better wordchoice, so my vote gowes to him, very nice stroy though opt1k...

v/black~magik