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12-08-05, 03:07 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Its Gonna Be Alright-Unf And Inter(We Had To Do It Again!!!)
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www.soundclick.com/unf The Top Track Hook:Some Girl/UNF Verse 1:Intermental Hook:Some Girl/UNF Verse 2:B.Daniel Hook:Some Girl/UNF Verse 3:Intermental Hook:Some Girl/UNF Left Feed On The Messenger-How I Do Cho Kahn MiWang-Hungry Special Thx To Cho Kahn For Doin The Samples For Me
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12-08-05, 03:31 PM | #2 | ||||||
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intermental turn your vocals down, theres to much boom in your voice... I couldnt hear your verse because of that... UNF my god..... you came on this track and exploded on it.. its like you got better in over a day good shit man. This was a hot collab 9.5/10
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12-08-05, 03:33 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Wow THx man I Aprreciate It A Lot...........
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12-08-05, 03:57 PM | #4 | |||||
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Ok allow me to break this down.
The very beginning was not all that great in my mind until some music started coming in. Then it progressively got better. Internmental.. your 1st verse was good, you flowed nice w/ the beat and were on point but it sounded like you were huggin the mic.. Voice was very low and loud. Although sounding like this you 2nd verse was much better. I heard a good vocabulary on it and I enjoyed it. B. / U.N.F. - I thought you sounded great on your verse. You came in strong and w/ the beat and followed through the whole way. Your vocab could have been more colorul but what you did came together rather nice. The think i liked least about hearing you was the Hook. Just got in the way of the giirls singing. Overall good verse dude. OVerall - I thought this piece was very enjoyable. You were both on w/ the beat and flowing nicely which is good. I cant really complain about either parts except the part about internmental sounding a little off. Otherwise 8/10.... nice shit fellas. 1
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12-08-05, 04:03 PM | #5 | |||
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i used that tupac sample before...haa
intro kinda longish Inter...vocals louder than the beat...bring em down some and the adlibs are as loud as the main vocals...crank them down even more ur verse was pretty good though...was feelin it B Dan...ur Ad libs durin the hook were too low...crank em UP u sound very far away from my ears bro...Bring ur levels up some...u and Inter need to split the difference...that wudda be the perfect level flow was good tho pretty unique soundin track not bad dawgs 1 |
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12-08-05, 04:07 PM | #6 | |||||||
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Thx Dudes...Uppppppppppppppppp
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12-08-05, 04:29 PM | #7 | |||||||
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Upppppppppppppp..................
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12-08-05, 05:29 PM | #8 | |||||||
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Upppppppppppp........................
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12-08-05, 06:19 PM | #9 | ||||
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unf turn ur adlibs up liek q said
intermental shit was a little too loud lyrics were cool flow was good i was feeling this verse unf good lyrics flow is good u stay elevating lol voice is good did you hit puberty last night lol chorus i liek it intermental again came cool alright cool song liked unfs adlibs on the trackl those were cool props on this track
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12-09-05, 01:47 PM | #10 | |||||||
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Arghhh...You Always Make Jokes
But Thx For The Feed Uppp............
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12-09-05, 05:01 PM | #12 | ||||
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thanks fo sho......LMAO at the sig u got...i love that
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12-09-05, 05:31 PM | #13 | |||||||
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Yeah Koo....Uppp!
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12-10-05, 05:24 AM | #14 | |||||||
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uppppppppppppppppppppppp
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12-10-05, 09:51 AM | #15 | |||||||
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damnnnn yo ! u got some SICK ass samples !!...lol
iight i told u on aim but....beat is NASTY bro....chorus is tight...1st dude...voice is nice but..ur quality hurts is...need more emotion..ur adlibs not real great..flow is ok..lyrics r nice..2nd dude..emotion is killer...u come in a bit harsh...lyrics r tight....flow is their...quality is decent..3rd verse...nice lyrics..flow is better here..multies r killin it man...need more emotion still tho..quality still bad...i like ur voice tho man....again...whoever did u samples is a GOD.....damn.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216660 RTF 1nE
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