My Complicated Life -

I was born usin pre natal instrumental invention,combination of nurse and doctor and medical convention,uncomplicated deliverance of young child is there intention/
ambilicol cord cut my impression of life was expressed,tha cry of a youngster name West and behold a child suckles from it's mothers breast/
raised without hesitation love was never witheld,to give and not receive was my families choice through mutual love we were compelled/
tha world is joined by a boy tha cumin together of a life and a meaning,family a shoulder to cry on and will always be there for leaning/
so innocent yet so magnificant i grew from seed like tha beanstock fairytale,my life now starts to evolve and grow and responsibilty and consequences are entailed/
learning and absorbing knowledge i was like a bathroom sponge,in this vast sea of words and numbers i acquired information and jamp in head first with a lunge/
sports and athleticism are a passion which defeats books and pages,violence and rages young child behaviour is encompast and felt by everyone at these stages/

Hook -

All that i can say is,

life is so complicated to find a meaning or reason isn't tha way to be/
life is there for living it cannot be classified jus look at you and me/
mistakes can be made and ultimately there will be big,small and many/
but a life with mistakes or a meaning is better that not having any/

Higher education is begun my learned abilities start to brighten and astonish,like tha fertalisation of a flower i had formed from tha light and i now began to grow and flourish/
inner strength and dedication to god lead me to tha correct path,tha road leading to this was troublesome and sometimes felt like devilsome wrath/
as my academic career started to fulfill and show promise,my recreational and once thought stronger oppurtunity began to slowly depreciate and abmonish/
bodily enhancing substances began to become regularity and combine with my DNA,tha structure of my life was changed and forever would i see through a microscope tha mistakes which i had made/
anxciety and resentment at this point had my life on auto pilot,i was controlled by another form and loss of my loved ones left me in a state of silence/
repentance and to redeem myself had me rising from the dead like never before done,i asked for forgiveness of sins,i only had to spread tha word through ryhmes as did previously by gods son/
i have to make changes as i have nuthin to lose and everything to gain,do i sing,preach or testify,tha prophet tupac showed me tha way as i began to write myself after i heard and felt makavelli's pain/
i smile life has began to change form as past mistakes were left in tha distance,a new face was born in hip hop tha education has continued through university and as i look back,no regrets what i left behind only helps me in tha future conquer peoples resistance/

Hook -

And all that i can say is,

life is so complicated to find a meaning or reason isn't tha way to be/
life is there for living it cannot be classified jus look at you and me/
mistakes can be made and ultimately there will be big,small and many/
but a life with mistakes or a meaning is better that not having any/

Hook -

Once again remember this message,

life is so complicated to find a meaning or reason isn't tha way to be/
life is there for living it cannot be classified jus look at you and me/
mistakes can be made and ultimately there will be big,small and many/
but a life with mistakes or a meaning is better that not having any/

decent
if its audio u'd need to shorten the bars alot for flows purpose
seemed some vocab was used just for the big words maybe not..
flow was shaky in parts due to the length of lines but was decent in other spots
content was reasonably interestng..i read it all..
hook was decent
simple verse but overall give it a 7/10

long bars used coz it was done to a beat,slow melodic meanigful track,remember i spit fast,this wasn't a long peice,also fionn u haven't done audio! but thanx for feedback

Nice man , ....some personal shit, was a nice drop, ....liked readin it....dawg props to u

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Fuck you

Uppin

i was feelin it, the hook was a little shaky, but overall id put it a 8/10. i enjoyed readin it.

Uppin this shit dawgs.

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Nice West........Nice

Topic, yeah played, but you put it out very well....
Well i shouldnt say played, becuz everyone is different, but ya know what i mean..
Your vocab was good...Very nice use of it.....Not to Simple, but it was like Amazing.

Overall this was a very nice peice. Keep spittin homie...
Check mine...You'll see it

Overall- 8/10

thanx Slick uppin for more feedback.

Peace