yea, I posted it in battle but wanted more feed too. so word...

www.soundclick.com/itsdakidspul

Skit: Zone Out/SPuL
Intro: SPuL
First verse: SPuL
Hook: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Outro: SPuL
Beat: "Made You Look" by NaS
Lyrics:

Now I'm not a promotor of violene
but could we please have a little moment of silence?
....That's for you, J
Got you duct taped up in the truck, kick, pushin' like you Lupe
This ain't no movie. When you're dead you dead
This a one-sided bout, fucka two-way
Dude, wait... King of the North?
Fuck a coast, kid, you ain't even King of your State
Listen...girls, love me, they all kissing the guy
But if it's thumbs up for, J... he's just hitchin' a ride
Man, I'm hot, I abuse...leave you shakin' like Michael J. Fox
Only thing you ain't got his excuse
Best not get confused, I'm reppin' the new set
I'm rude bet, makin' money, doing my 2 step
Your weak, I tell your, girl "yo honey, you nude yet?"
Cuz losing's a bitch, and the only one you'll get

(Chorus x2)
SPuL's comin'!! Yo J you shook
Feel ashamed, say my name, you cooked
You ain't a king, you a clown, cat. You're going down (BLAT!)
Lyin' on the ground, noww.. where my crown at?

Kid, you want beef? That's stupid to say
Cuz I got Kobe lookin' jealous, way I'm shooting a J
You reppin' Alanson, kid. That just shows that you wack
But congrats, on being King, where nobody raps!
This punks mine.. so if you really ARE what you eat
Watch J's next battle for my punchlines
I'll leave your group with a knife to their neck right
Cuz it's a Breeze beating Summers, like your sex life
Ain't got lines to waste, wanted to dumb it down a bit
But your songs beat me to the chase
Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers
Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall
Your group playin' you. Don't cry but yo
You're just the whiteboy they found to give 'em ride to shows
Kid, you ain't fire. Rap hasn't look forward
To J. Summers, since fuckin' Jigga retired

(Chorus x2)
SPuL's comin'!! Yo J you shook
Feel ashamed, say my name, you cooked
You ain't a king, you a clown, cat. You're going down (BLAT!)
Lyin' on the ground, noww.. where my crown at?

LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237018
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236723

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roflmao @ the intro
we was foolin on this shit

kick pushin like lupe is slightly played..
lol @ the you aint even king of your state
the michael j fox line is decent
shit's flowin nicely
heh @ shootin the j
the "you the king where no body raps" that was ill
the J Fall line hit hard
roflmao @ the "get crunk" addlib
shits all decent
overall Imma give it a 7.5/10
lol @ the subliminal from the party track
aiyo
I dont see J Summers with the lyrical capability or creativeness to have something better than this
nice job

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LMFAO @ intro.....now THAT is dopeness

where your going "King Me'' thats mixed nicely....

1st verse is pretty nice....

im liking the opener on the 2nd verse...

lmao @ last season line..dope

lol closer is ill too...2nd verse is def. better in my opinion...you toasted him on that one...


yea...i really dont see j summers coming with anything better than this..but...you never know......

lol good track man...and probably the best mixed track ive heard from u....

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im feelin u.....ur pretty good as an audio head....
this is was decent.....well some steps above decent.....

u got good emotion and flow.....good delivery

this was on point man....
like the lupe ish and ur multis afterwards on announciation
thumbs up tight....ender of 1st verse yes....

chorus is coo....likes

beatin line coo
fall and summers line coo

.......WOW.....



Now thats a fuckin battle track right thurr.......




gotta give credit where its due.... for a battle track... this shit was pretty heavy...



it aint over till its over though.... waiting on J.Summers to fire back one time...



Freakin Bully

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

^haha thanks appreciate it yo.

and word props to everyone else for feed too. wordddd

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lmfao, intro iz illyness.

dope track.

but howd u guys do tha intro? shit really sounds like ur in tha same room talkin n shit, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

I actually found it alright......you're probably thinking I'm hating, but the only real things I liked about it were the intro (pretty creative), the production (top notch man.....seriously) and the J Fall line. The rest of the lyrics sounded pretty played to me. I'm sure there were some more original concepts in there that I'm missing, but you did way too many J something lines and it just wasn't hitting in my opinion. Now, on the production side of things, like I said, you fuckin held it down man......props.


Now it's time to await J's diss

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^blah blah blah blah blah....

and word kool. i just tried to make volume close to the same that Zone did. but word upppp... where the fuck is J?

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very impressive this actually, quite a few played out lines in there, but ya made up for it with the nice cocky delivery, and sick flow haha...nice battle tune man

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Why get all bent outta shape there turtle jizz?

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^hmm..... so not givin' a fuck about a 26 yr old rapper who can't get nowhere thinks is getting bent out of shape? ok, there buddy. How bout you get off my dick and get out of this thread. You already said what you think, so why keep posting here? Don't you got kids to attend to?

BUT THEN AGAIN... i forgot how much you must be on J. Summers dick, so of course you'd be standing up for your lil buddy who got you a show aka the "PHANTOM" show. Gotta rely on kids 8 years younger than you, huh? Sad....

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blaowwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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roffffffflmao i used to watch this show when i was little lol
spuls coming you sound like carson jet and its really annoying lol : /
crunk on lmao nice adlibs there
uhh not feeling this spuls coming : /

solid diss intro killed it
what the fuck ever happened to that show lol : /
i liekd everything except your hook spuls coming shit
you sounded like carson jet to a t

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