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01-19-07, 08:14 AM | #1 | ||
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IP:
your metas are fucking crazy, i read it twice and the way each
section is done is like i said fucking crazy, these lines were very interesting to me... Quote:
these three lines just felt deep, i saw the medical kit as him tryin to salvage the relationship, while the flash light was like hope, and the axe became his desperation, which for me made the whole piece make sense...i started to see the piece in a whole new light...the connections throughout suddenly became clear i saw everything as metaphors for a relationship in trouble, the diamonds bluff...for me became divorce...which correlates with the third stanza, i have theories on the others but its the ending im having the most problems with...if im on the right track...are they at the divorce table or have you twisted the ending to a prequel to when they first got married, its the jokers dismay line thats throwing me...and if im totally wrong sorry bout that…but at least you know I saw something in this piece and I enjoyed it…engaged the mind…dope |
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02-04-07, 09:39 PM | #2 | |||
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thanks for the dope feed brother. you pretty much nailed it. the guy who posted beneath you can answer ur question regarding the last bit. it was based on a kind of saw theme - however i did try to tie in a lot of metaphors. the story is about a man who throws away true love - hence the divorce - which is mainly due to his gambling obession and neglect for his familiy. his kid then sees this shit goin on, and it affects him negatively - hence why he brings them back together with life on the line. the ending symbolizes their death - and how they can finally love and lay together in peace. The joker, of course, represents his son. while the king and queen are husband and wife
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