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GBA Champion

Axe

wanna use pics?..

ill do my shit tonight if im bored enough..
just match me..

Don't front you wack bitch cuz truth is I'm passin you man
Even X got his fingers crossed....
Like "I hope this bitch Pryce makes me look better than I actually am"
Give a damn dude, I'll turn ya big ass Adam's apple into plush cider
& ya sex life is homo as hell, explains why you call yourself a Ruff Ryder
That ya security in the back? I think its quite vigor of henchmen
It makes you look more retarded, standing at a fucking sticker convention
So don't be actin like ya cool, I'll run ya over in my hummer ya fool
The white guy looks uppity, and you?..just look a bit uncomfortable
Put ur hands down X, can't stand the gayness ya guys are demonstrating
Looks like the white dude got a boner, while fucking hyperventilating
Now end it cuz I've seen you like this more than one time
Pic shows ur forehead is shiny, even when there Aint No Sunshine


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GBA Champion

Axe

usually i agree wit nas but its not that im bitchin
but hip hop isnt DEAD we just left The Game in a bad condition
he gots big wheels, thats all, hes not for diversity lovers
soo.. yeah hes sittin on platinum 24s.. in ALL his album covers
lyin ass nigga, he aint fuckin these model bitches all hard
cause when he fingered vida guerra..
..he was clawin at the comp screen gruntin 'so close yet so far'
Ya first album was mainstream, better underground so no edge dude
better yet, The Documentary would been good as an animal planet special!
Drop another shitty song and i show the chrome..
then the game will be fucked up like niggas streakin across the dome



not a business man/hustla prolly wears ties clip on
a total fake, make up ya mind..
..i mean HOLY SHIT! hes a blood, wearin blue, thats islam!

Cool up for votes...

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GBA Champion

Axe

Don't front you wack bitch cuz truth is I'm passin you man
Even X got his fingers crossed....
Like "I hope this bitch Pryce makes me look better than I actually am"
meh 1/3
Give a damn dude, I'll turn ya big ass Adam's apple into plush cider
& ya sex life is homo as hell, explains why you call yourself a Ruff Ryder
someone in the league this week used this on styles P, so no 0/3
That ya security in the back? I think its quite vigor of henchmen
It makes you look more retarded, standing at a fucking sticker convention
ok 2/3
So don't be actin like ya cool, I'll run ya over in my hummer ya fool
The white guy looks uppity, and you?..just look a bit uncomfortable
and??? no 0/3
Put ur hands down X, can't stand the gayness ya guys are demonstrating
Looks like the white dude got a boner, while fucking hyperventilating
meh 1/3
Now end it cuz I've seen you like this more than one time
Pic shows ur forehead is shiny, even when there Aint No Sunshine
iight 2.5/3

6.5 in total

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usually i agree wit nas but its not that im bitchin
but hip hop isnt DEAD we just left The Game in a bad condition
ok 2/3
he gots big wheels, thats all, hes not for diversity lovers
soo.. yeah hes sittin on platinum 24s.. in ALL his album covers
meh 1/3
lyin ass nigga, he aint fuckin these model bitches all hard
cause when he fingered vida guerra..
..he was clawin at the comp screen gruntin 'so close yet so far'
meh 1/3
Ya first album was mainstream, better underground so no edge dude
better yet, The Documentary would been good as an animal planet special!
nah 0/3
Drop another shitty song and i show the chrome..
then the game will be fucked up like niggas streakin across the dome
no 0/3
not a business man/hustla prolly wears ties clip on
a total fake, make up ya mind..
..i mean HOLY SHIT! hes a blood, wearin blue, thats islam!
lmao cool 3/3

7 in total

Vote: Priceless, close battle

Axe:
That ya security in the back? I think its quite vigor of henchmen
It makes you look more retarded, standing at a fucking sticker convention
Now end it cuz I've seen you like this more than one time
Pic shows ur forehead is shiny, even when there Aint No Sunshine

Pryce:
usually i agree wit nas but its not that im bitchin
but hip hop isnt DEAD we just left The Game in a bad condition


ight, I thought Pryce's quote was better than Axe's but in the end poor wording ruined the rest of Pryce's verse for me, he definitly had some cool concepts though
in the end it was very close, but I thought Axe was just more consistant

close but I got Axe takin it
v/ Axeshun

Don't front you wack bitch cuz truth is I'm passin you man
Even X got his fingers crossed....
Like "I hope this bitch Pryce makes me look better than I actually am"
Sort of stretched but, overall funny. Could have been worded better but ok nonetheless.

That ya security in the back? I think its quite vigor of henchmen
It makes you look more retarded, standing at a fucking sticker convention
I thought this was your next best line it was direct but still didn't hit that hard

overall you could have been wayyy more creative. think outside the box i mean dam its dmx lol.

vs

usually i agree wit nas but its not that im bitchin
but hip hop isnt DEAD we just left The Game in a bad condition
good concept good wording good start

but after that you just fell hard. with more concepts along ^ those lines you could have won easily. some of your other punches like the vida line were just corny

v//rival basicly for more consistency

Don't front you wack bitch cuz truth is I'm passin you man
Even X got his fingers crossed....
Like "I hope this bitch Pryce makes me look better than I actually am"
That ya security in the back? I think its quite vigor of henchmen
It makes you look more retarded, standing at a fucking sticker convention

vs.

usually i agree wit nas but its not that im bitchin
but hip hop isnt DEAD we just left The Game in a bad condition

Axeshun, very inconsistent verse from you. You did have 2 very nice lines. Opener was great, it was funny and a good pic diss. The sticker convention thing u coulda worded better, but another funny concept. Rest was pretty ehh, so just spend more time developing good concepts. Pryce, u had a good opener, but that was about it. Animal special line wasn't bad either, but not good enough to quote, and the rest of the verse I felt fell off hard.

Vote - Axeshun

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