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Old 02-11-05, 05:37 PM   #1
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Given Light vs Young Duke

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Battles Go Up Monday (Only Friday this time, starting after this week will be Mondays)
Check In Due Wednesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
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Voting Ends Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time

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Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week

Topic : When the sun rises
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Old 02-14-05, 11:52 PM   #2
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LoL check final you bastard, did you sign me up? LoL
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Old 02-15-05, 12:41 AM   #3
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When the Sun rises….



Early one morning as I awoke to the call of a mockingbird
Straining myself to get out the warm depths of my bed, to the beautiful songs I heard
Cheerful morning it seemed well enough, a new day to begin my long strenuous day
The night now gone, I lay awake, bright-eyed at the world that lay….




…………

Stretching, yawning, tired, but awake none the less
Earlier that night, feeling of conquering came over, completed Quest
What did I do of that night, to feel whole again, no more sleepless nights
Undressed, and turned on the shower, cold water emerged, no light
Taking my dark, cold shower I wondered always pondered
It’s like my mind was dirty and taken out, and laundered
Washed and dried out, gone with the wind, brought up with the sun
Never lived a ruff life, never lived an easy one, old, but young
Thoughts arriving and departing, my mind like a terminal
Caught, eyes darting, avoiding the foreseen, yet inevitable



……………

Brain at respite, I found what I was seeking, reconciliation
Tranquility, disturbed only by the most strident of motion
Could only conceive what I contemplated was ease in one thought
At rest I laid, once again, but clean, shower done, a drought

……….

Confused, but early one morning I awoke to the call of a mockingbird
Peculiarly, it seems the indistinguishable elderly thing I’ve done, for years untold…
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Old 02-15-05, 02:47 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Given Light
LoL check final you bastard, did you sign me up? LoL


lol nah you signed up like 4 or 5 weeks ago...and what happen was you noshowed so you got banned for 2 weeks and you were let in like the rest of the people who got banned so if you wanna be signed out just put it in the thread or tell me on aim...

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Old 02-15-05, 05:01 PM   #5
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I already dropped, nah I'll stay in.
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Old 02-17-05, 03:57 PM   #6
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Given Light wins due to noshow and im signing out Young Duke

Given Light +3
Young Duke -4

and im leaving thread open for any feedback anybody wants to give on givens verse
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Old 02-17-05, 04:31 PM   #7
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which you should do of course, leave feedback assholes.

Just kidding I love you all.
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