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15 lines min
no crew votes
house rules in short....


gd luck & may d best win

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ayo xtasy ur rhymes soundz gd but actually u suck
im runnin this shit im killin u without givin a fuck
take yo rhymes to the courtroom ther u got a chance to win
u suck dick like erry ho' on the streetz guess ur name Ms kim
check my shit straight outta hell spittin them flames
stop this shit u loose , i aint playin sum fuckin games
meet the killa , i show no fear u started a war
stand on the corners actin like u a fuckin rapstar
im a warrior , fuck off bitch i dont fear sum danger
im on fire fuck u up ima show u sum fuckin anger
i walk around with a big 4 4
im here to kill sumbody thatz 4sho'
and i kno u like my style
the way that i break u down
wont show no fear , aint affraid to die
now drop yo shit , to c if its worth anotha rhyme

ok..........

you say u show no fear...repeating it show that u so damn scared....
son i aint even tormented u....yet its like u got ur legs shaking cos u feel screwed....
this pussy white boy is a fool....saying im Ms Kim,i suck dick.....yeah what aboutur mom? how she have u?..
u just a gay ass cunt...who smokes weak ass blunts
trynna tip toe into d game....
nigga quit it..cos u just a damn SHAME....
you dont spit no fucking flame/so i push that aside...cos its me whos got d fucking fame/bitch check out my name../you pop that shit....u fuck up ur brain../i think u just a paddy broad trynna pull rank/nigga with those lines u fucking shot blank/my spits are overworth it to be adored/put it close to urs & urs are over worthless.. so they ignored/my position in this competiton is apearently outta comprehnsion/i wonder why i called out a weak ass fly../to come show he STUPID,fucked up & hes high/i said 15 lines..nigga are u dumb or what?/listen im done wicha..i said mayd best 1 win...but the best 1 has won...(hehehe)

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lol, I think XxX got this one all her punches were much harder, like I always say i'm not one to judge what yall should work on cuz i ain't even on tha battlin level yet. But both of yall did good, but I go with XXX. Holla!

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!

round 2
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sum say im crayzeee
ur punk ass just can't fade me
u gone hear the truth , so don't cry just ask why
& try not to die as i take through another fuckin killa rhyme
dont run outta breath these last steps can take u to death
u bout to choke on this 1 , give up this shit .. b4 bustin caps into ur chest
my mack 10 outta the window im bout to let it loose
bac off uz a ho' , accept it u aint got shit to choose
must be a family buisness suckin dicks for a dolla
if i wanna get my dick sucked all i gotta do holla
i could b ur daddy , oh shit i forgot i'm not fuckin dem buffalos
shit got fucked up who wantz a ho' lookin like FIDEL CASTRO
new terrorist alive , droppin sum bombs on this screen with my lines
im on fire i wont stop this flow , fuck off im bout to break yo spine
im a warrior , u right muthafucker i aint affraid of sum danger

i dont know what the fuck u want from me...
i won the first round...u still wanna show how much u are weak?
u stupid,you've just proved it officially...
bitch this shit aint a game...and i think u not respecting it...
herres another verse..touch d screen...cos i know u not believing it..
son,how many times do i have to say i dont fuck with gay ass cunts...
you 2 fucking low to come spit at me at this point...
if u cant spit somet different...dont touch d keybaord..
just keep ya hands to ya cock...
or ima pull out my glock..put it up ur skinny ass..right b4 3 o'clock..
you call that a death rhyme?...
open ur mouth,all astonished,ready to tell u what it is in only 1 fucking line...
it about d truth..not bitching and lieing...
stop calling me a fucking hoe...
cos i aint neva gonna fuck with a retard who is so damn slow,
bitch u damn know....
my spits are like a hot food in a plate...
i thro it on ya face,if u a fighter,make sure u dont xcape...
the only word i wanna say....
is a big ass FUCK YOU & U ARE GAY..
like u guys do to bitches...
ima push u on ya knees...and therres my clit to lick...
you not no warrior...dont be fooled by a fucking avatar...
you weak..YOU SUCK!!!...
dont let me repeat that you dumb ass fuck..
u just got bitch slapped..
so therre aint no need to clap back...
if u aint a JA-FOOL or JA-BRAT

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yo we need only 1 person to put an end to this shit.....
votes please............
Pz

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i think ouvisouly XXXtasy won because man i really didn't like Hellrazor

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

at frist i didn't see round 2 and holy shit hellrazor those mybe youe words but that 2pacs style have you ever heard tha song Ghost

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

first of all thanx.......but u didnt poll and didnt xplain ya vote...u know how shits go when votes aint xplained.....

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xtacy you suck no offence but you gotta elevate i mean your verse is so stretched and went smaller lol, and your punches were all over the pleace... what can I say really bad structure

overall

punches tie
flow hazer
structure hazer

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I'm The Best On This Site My Battle Record Says It All

i will vote on this if u drop a vote on this aight~one~
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...34&page=2&pp=15