Battle Rules:

20-30 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Beef



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-21-07 at 01:39 PM

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Closed - expired battle win

K-M has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-07 03:32 PM.

good luck........


im back to rip get strapped to attack on a rampage....
this ghost figure wanna battle so im quick to engage.....
lyrically i'll leave your writtens "pissed on"....
.....like the seat of a public toilet kid.....
u could "bench press weight and practice boxing"....
....but like "missles missing targets"....
.....your "punches" still wouldn't "strike a confirmed hit".....
i'll burn this bitch put in work i can see weak spots through all your text...
....cause the shit u make is made "fragile and thin"....
......like " cracking windows with 30% strength of a fist"......
battling u probably is a waste of my lines.....
.....i dont have to even think when challenging this fiend.....
.....these rhymes are putting a "brutal effect to your spine"....
.....there "too much for u to handle" like "lifting heavy objects in an industrial factory"....
u should of back down from this battle never accepted the opportunity....
cause im a "threat to your area of operation".....
......like a "charge of rocket scuds aimed at allied countries".....
u just not touching me never in your life or in a thousand years.....
.....i bet after reading this shit u crying on your knees to your mama in tears.....
dont ever get me tempted to anger cause when i go off to "freeze" u.....
....its worst than "frost bitten body parts falling off limbs" when i beat u......


.............~1~

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GHO$T has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-07 06:41 AM.

"posted" up like a sticky note, makin more "dough" than a bakery
only "grinding" you do is that noise wit ur teeth, cuz u hatin on me
i pack big guns, "blastin" off more rockets than NASA
havin the next nigga to see him be the cops, his mama and the pastor
hittin more licks than a lesbians vagina, better hope we dont come your way
put a "hole in one" nigga, this aint golf but you wont live to see the next day
nigga claim he go "hard", but its only when he sees other dudes
fucking wit me?..shit, this niggga was "made to be broken" like rules

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good drop.....uppin for votes......................

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SMH@u ghost yo read the rules....i said 20-30 lines...u only dropped about 8 lines....No Recycling.....that rocket nasa line u used in your last battle....

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w/e.......dnt matter...............................

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Voted For: K-M

Okay K-M i hope u understand this time lol jp dawg! Umm this was kinda a plain battle as far as i think that K-M u have had this same kinda style before and part of a good mc is that u mix up the way u spit sumtimes! Not sayin u dont do that and no sayin that u arent good cuz u are jus try to get more creative!


GhoSt ur gunna have to start gettin better on here this is better then most of ur other battles but at the SAME time its not a good enough one to win! Urs is sumthin u should take to cypher rooms! So try to get ur taste up a lil but nice flow!

OVERALL; K-M!

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thanks for the feedback fly E....and hope u know this not even close to my best im only at 30-40 percent skill here....theres no point in going off like a cannon if u know what i mean its not that serious to go 70-80 percent of your skills when u battlin... only with certain opponents that u know maybe are hard to beat...otherwise u just wasting lines if u know what i mean......

~1~

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Voted For: K-M

"posted" up like a sticky note, makin more "dough" than a bakery
only "grinding" you do is that noise wit ur teeth, cuz u hatin on me
aight start...

i pack big guns, "blastin" off more rockets than NASA
havin the next nigga to see him be the cops, his mama and the pastor
nah...

hittin more licks than a lesbians vagina, better hope we dont come your way
put a "hole in one" nigga, this aint golf but you wont live to see the next day
aight.. no punch...but decent flow...

nigga claim he go "hard", but its only when he sees other dudes
fucking wit me?..shit, this niggga was "made to be broken" like rules
been said and flip many times but oookay i guess...

well lets see what the thing i have a problem with...
in the rules it says a 20-30 line battle so i was figuering you'll have more but you didnt? did u run out of thing to say? no more heat? what happen fam??
well u'r punches was weak and they wasnt creative
you flow was decent but thats about it..
no wordplay no meta's noting else to say about ya verse just that it seems u didnt try or if u did then it seems like u'r not elevating come on I KNOW YOU CAN do better then that....
this was a disapointment really and sad to see u actully drop this... hope u change and get on your a-game or grind it out in the cyphers for a min.... 3 outta 10

next

im back to rip get strapped to attack on a rampage....
this ghost figure wanna battle so im quick to engage.....
ok...
lyrically i'll leave your writtens "pissed on"....
.....like the seat of a public toilet kid.....
decent...

u could "bench press weight and practice boxing"....
....but like "missles missing targets"....
.....your "punches" still wouldn't "strike a confirmed hit".....
decent.. but the flow a bit off...

i'll burn this bitch put in work i can see weak spots through all your text...
....cause the shit u make is made "fragile and thin"....
......like " cracking windows with 30% strength of a fist"......
decent punch again but ya flow is a bit off and a bit strech...

but since he only went 8m lines i only judge 8 of your lines...
your structure is aight but could be better....
you flow on this was was aight but i've seen better....
your punches was decent and a bit creative but again i've seen better....

not saying your verse was wack or weak but your strcture could be better and then flow on this could of been to...
punches was decent...
7 outta 10..

k-m won this hands down...
its a good thing i aint read the rest could i bet it would of been worst for ghost....

GHOST: keep writting and drop in the cypher section in the crew fourm or the cypher fourm u'll elevate soon enough....

Voted For: K-M

ok in this one i was a bit confused by km's style but i got enough out of it to see you won, more personal more detailed punches hell more punches period and more direct ghost had better flow and structure

flow ghost
punches km
wordplay km

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