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Old 02-03-05, 08:07 PM   #1
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Lies Of The Devil (uppin for feed please)

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Scares on her body bruised of addiction
Her heart open, leaking wounds of affliction
He beats her bloody till shes gasping for air
Another love lost to a land of dispair
Home late again his intoxicated soul
Shes soundly resting and he loses control
He punches her belly unaware of the life
She fights ferociously as he reaches for the knife
Memories race past when times where heaven sent
He slaps her back to something far from benevolent
Out raged he cuts her shes terror-stricken
Red liquid runs and the error-thickens
She cries "im pregnant, your killing two"
He replies "Shut up bitch, with your words untrue"
"But baby don't you love me and your unborn son?"
"I never loved you, nd sit still itll hurt more if u run"
She looks into his eyes and pleads for forgiveness
She wouldn't want her worst enemy to real live this
He slashes one last time and her arm falls to the floor
A feeling of uncertainness rushes over him like never before
His hands covered with the juice of her living
Could god forgive this hatred of something so unforgiving
He has second thoughts and starts coming back to reality
The grief sets in about his wifes brutal fatality
He runs to the sink and try to wash off the devil
But Lucifer jumps and appears in his sinful revel
With his lies he preaches "She cheated and lied"
"No, I wont listen, your accusations I deny"
"Stupid man, she didn't love you she used you for money"
He shakes his head "I don't believe you, this isn't funny"
"Fine then don't trust me, you'll end up just like her"
"Your right I hate my life, and my futures a blur"
"So join me son, ill show you the light"
"It cant be that easy, theres a catch, this cant be right"
"Just give me your soul, and you'll live forever"
See evil is a trickster and his games are clever..
So the man agrees and hands over his life
And within an instant hes next to his wife
In the end the devil buys the life you sell
He keeps his promise, you do live forever..
Forever In Hell
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Old 02-03-05, 08:09 PM   #2
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Old 02-03-05, 08:10 PM   #3
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nice. I liked it. You know what you can work on... besides telling you that... nothing much more to say.

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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 02-03-05, 10:14 PM   #4
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uppin for feed back..
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Old 02-06-05, 08:18 PM   #5
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dont sleep on this please.. uppin for feedback
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Old 02-07-05, 02:28 PM   #6
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